@hybridlore
Active 12 hours, 14 minutes ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Koshka replied to the topic Hi…. (: in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 6 hours ago
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Hi…. (: in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 6 hours ago
@hybridlore WHOOOO YOU SAVED MA BACON! *pushes pig outta fireplace*
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Hi…. (: in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 6 hours ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @savannahgrace9 @koshka @trailblazer @elishavetpidyon @hybridlore @mineralizedwritings @Esther-c @anyone-else (SO MANY PPL GAH)
BRUH I CAME BACK AND THEN GHOSTED AGAIN IM SO SORRY… SOB ITS PROBS GONNA HAPPEN AGAIN NGL ROFL
Basically….Life……Exists now….
Sucks right? ROFL
GAH YALL…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 4 hours ago
Lol, it does sound like that. It’s a Christmas song.
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 5 hours ago
Sure thing! I haven’t been snowballed in a while though…it actually looks like there’s not much snowballing anymore!
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The Ducktator posted a new activity comment 5 days, 9 hours ago
@hybridlore
It’s fun! I get my birthday presents under the Christmas tree, I never have to do school, and my dad doesn’t have to work! Additionally, I love peppermint, and it’s easy to find peppermint stuff for my cake this time of year. -
TheShadow replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 6 days, 6 hours ago
@hybridlore @keilah-h @rae@loopylin @theshadow @arcticanimals @Esther-c @jonas @theducktator
Okay, so right now some of the votes are tied so Kefa and I decided to extend the deadline to the 3rd, so please vote. We’ll release the results around then and hopefully have the next chapter out within the next few weeks.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 8 hours ago
@stephie yesss that happens too sometimes, but less commonly.
also cool Italian writing on your signature. My mom loves that language.
@hybridlore thanks!! I guess my parents didn’t have great relationships with their siblings until they were all older so they were like “you guys should learn to like each other young so you’ll have each…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 8 hours ago
@ellette-giselle wow! What an ending! I loved the descriptions of the different soldiers’ uniforms and stuff for some reason, and I’m so glad you didn’t kill them off. (I agree with @hybridlore that them dying would’ve worsened the book; it would’ve felt like Aaron’s story all over again. Speaking of which, I’m glad you brought the topic of him…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 8 hours ago
No, not harsh at all! This is perfect!
Not sure how many illustrations yet. I think I have 20 for the last one.
Your guess has been noted, but no answers will be given.
Thank you so much!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 8 hours ago
Wow! This is soooo helpful!
Hmm, I find it funny that you think the ending thing feels a little un-realistic. I wrote it after reading of five different situations in different countries where something like this happened to Believers who had been arrested. XD
I guess the Bible is correct when it says God moves in mysterious…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 9 hours ago
Oh no!!! That’s terrible!!! That makes me want to cry for you!
Yay! I’m so glad for the feedback! Thank you again so much for doing this!
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 10 hours ago
Lucky, you had a party! Only the one brother stayed up with me. Everyone else went to bed. I beat said brother two times at A Little Wordy 😃, and then we spammed each other with weird dancing penguin gifs.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 11 hours ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @grcr
OKAY!
Well, thank you very much to any of y’all who survived all the way to the end. I’m excited to hear y’alls thoughts and I’m looking forward to lost of feedback. Here are some questions that I had. (I may have looked at your file for some question st…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 11 hours ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @grcr
The hours passed, but there was little dread in them for Joseph. Beric slept most of the time, and when Joseph laid a hand against the boy’s forehead, he found it was still hot with fever. His own eyes burned, and he was sure Stephen was little better.
Afte…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 14 hours ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @grcr
well, it’s 2025, but I have one section left to post, so I think I kinda did it….. in a kinda didn’t way. lolololol.
Keep an eye out as I shall be posting THE END of TVON today!
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 23 hours ago
Happy Almost New Year! I’m staying up till midnight,Â
which I normally do anyway,and playing a game with my brother. My family just watched A Christmas Story for the first time, so that was fun! Are you making any New Year’s resolutions this year? I’m working on my list. -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
Yes, it’s supposed to be fictionalized early church. I read Foxes Book of Martyrs, The Martyrs Mirror, and Acts before I wrote these, so I draw a lot out of those. In fact, a lot of the situations are real from real people’s accounts.
Some I wrote, some are old, old hymns from the underground church.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 week ago
Thank you so much for the feedback! I loved this! It’s super helpful.
Side note: interestingly enough, you said that the second book is your least favorite, while I’ve preferred it so far to the first one. We’ll see how the third and fourth compare.
You know what, Aaron will always be my favorite character, but I’m growing to lik…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
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