hybridlore

@ellette-giselle @hybridlore @rae @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009

I think at least some of you submitted right away, but unfortunately, I accidentally messed up the form, so it didn’t give you the right questions. I fixed it now, so if anyone who hasn’t redone it yet could re-submit, that would be great. My bad! Sorry for the inconvenience.

@hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium

All right! Thank you both! I’m happy to hear you found it interested. It will probably be a while until I return to this, but if I ever do I will let you know.

The beginning was slightly confusing, because I couldn’t figure out how Cedrick was narrating.

Yeah, making that work is going to be a bit of a c…[Read more]

@hybridlore

awesome!

@linus-smallprint

Nooooo! I am losing my only guy feedback person! 😱

I understand that though.

A World War II spy story!

Funny you say that….. I currently am writing a WWII spy story. F.O.S. But no, this is not WWII.

@hybridlore

I plan on starting asap if I’m to get two books rewritten, edited, formatted, and printed by…[Read more]

@hybridlore

That would be lovely, if you please

@ellette-giselle @grcr @hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium @rae @theducktator @loopylin @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @savannah_grace2009

Okay, sorry for taking so long to get back to this. I have a google form here to figure out how to best organize this. Please fill this out, even if you are just planning on giving feedback.           …[Read more]

@hybridlore

Wait really!!!!

*jumps around cheering*

Yahoo!!!!

@hybridlore    @keilah-h

Thank you, thank you, thank you very much. *twirls hat dramatically because for some reason that is the mental image I have* Feedback like this is always super helpful.

In answer to Hybrid’s question, this book is about the length of the first one with the middle two being the longest. I just submitted really bi…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

QUESTIONS!

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do tha…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Oh, ok.

@hybridlore

On docs?

@hybridlore

Did you check her access to see if she’s authorized to edit?

@hybridlore

Okay, I only got one.

idk if you saw my email, but it won’t let me past your safety measures.

@hybridlore

Where are the links?

@hybridlore

Oh yay!! I was so sad when I went to comment and realized I couldn’t.

@hybridlore     @keilah-h

Lolololol.

Okay, well Joseph and Amelia ended up having nine kids. Mercy was the oldest of their children, with Beric being the oldest through adoption. (of that makes sense)

Beric and Quin designed a network of guys who went throughout Ardenta helping farmers recover land and people rebuild after the war. These g…[Read more]

@hybridlore

No. I can’t. Not without an account. 😥

Could you try using Microsoft? I have an account with them, and it’s not attached to google. It’s honestly safer, which is why I went with them. And You can set it up for free.