@hybridlore
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
I don’t know if you saw it or not, but I am back! I will try to get to reading and critiquing part three of The Color of Hope tommorow!
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Linus Smallprint posted an update 8 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @keliah-h @stephie @theducktator @whalekeeper @hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium
Hello everyone! I’m back!
An update regarding my writing. I was reflecting on the things I write. My goal in my writing is first and foremost to glorify God. But I’ve realized I have let the fantasy side of my writing become an idol to me. I admit I…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
also mmm, I love cheesecake.
Why do I feel like Sniper would like cheesecake? XD. I don’t know, I can just picture him denying that he enjoys it.
@loopylin @theducktator @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @keilah
Thanks everyone!
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 4 weeks ago
I filled out your feedback form!
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon
I was gonna update you last night, but I figured I’d wait and give you all the tea in one post.
Today we did it! We went out to all the little shops, and it was awesome! Four (three of which I wanted to look at sadly) were closed, but we still got to go to three…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
hmmm. What do you think of Me just removing the last paragraph completely? Would that be enough?
yes, I designed all of it.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore
I made some edits on the cover after some of the feedback I got.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
Lovely. You disabled copy and paste on the doc. Now I have to do it all the hard way. XD
Okay, feedback answers.
OVERALL
What was your overall impression of the story?
Not sure entirely what you are looking for, but I walked away feeling really excited for the next book and also really refreshed as this is one of my…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
@koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon     @theducktator    @grcr    @whalekeeper   @power   @hybridlore
Here is the cover of the book. I’m gonna leave this link up for a bit and then take it down.
Any thoughts?
https…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
Thank you!!
People wanted to know what the insignia on the uniforms was, and it took a bit to design it, but I think I pulled it off.
Glad you like it!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
@koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon     @theducktator    @grcr    @whalekeeper   @power   @hybridlore
for everyone who was asking, I finally designed an Insignia. What do y’all think?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
@koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon     @theducktator    @grcr    @whalekeeper   @power   @hybridlore
I”M HOME!!!!
Now to look at the doc for the first time in weeks!!!!!!!!
Also, as soon as I get the question I posted answered I can start on the next step. 😉
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
Yeah, I meant to update you, but obviously I didn’t. Sorry.
@keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @ellette
I did decide on something that turned out to be completely different than my other plans. My family and I went to a zoo a couple weeks ago, on the way, we passed through an area that had tons of…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
@koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @theducktator    @grcr  @whalekeeper  @power  @hybridlore
scrap the breakdown. I literally did the whole thing and KP deleted it. I don’t feel like doing it all over again, and the actual outlines are in my laptop.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
@koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @theducktator    @grcr  @whalekeeper  @power  @hybridlore
okay… this is kind of weird. I can’t access the doc without my laptop so in my mind y’all haven’t reached the end, but I bet a good deal of you have…
so, I’m going to blindly ask some questions!! 🤣
just keep in min…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 9 months ago
Thank you!
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whaley replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 9 months ago
Good, good. *Makes a mental note* The flame of hope shall not flicker out!!
Indeed! I am kind of surprised we haven’t had a visit from Wyoh or the other bugs in a while.
Ooh, I suppose I should have mentioned what’s going on. Basically we can’t contact any KP leaders. All of their names have been taken off…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
@hybridlore ikr? It is honestly so sad.
ooo! This is good!! I like this! I know for sure who it is, and to several of them that actually happens. (Though not an orange rock. 😝)
HAHA I knew you were gonna say this.
Yours are also really good scenarios, I can totally see them happening.
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@linus-smallprint
HI!!! I was so shocked when I got a notification from you. haha! Glad to have you back!
I can totally see where you are coming from and I actually respect it. Though I’m eager to see what happens with Alan and the gang, I totally understand.
Anyhow, glad to have you back!
Let me know if you ever have time for some…[Read more]
@ellette-giselle
Thank you for understanding! I will try to get to checking out your Mission Impossible tomorrow!
@linus-smallprint
Oh that would be great! Thanks you!
Glad to see you’re back! I know I wasn’t reading your project, but I understand where you’re coming from. Feel free to take as much time as you need, and if you don’t want to finish TCoH right now, that’s totally fine. I don’t want to be a stumbling block to you or anyone else, so please know if you need to take time away from that as well, I com…[Read more]
Don’t worry, I will return to reading TCoH. The thing that was causing me to stumble is something that usually only appears in fantasy books. Science fiction is the only other genre I know of it could appear in. Your book is fine. There was nothing of that sort in it, so I will pick it up again and continue reading.
Glad to hear! Looking forward to reading your feedback!
Hi! I’m glad you’re back! Though when I saw your name in my email, I thought you’d created a topic for Book 3. 😢 But I understand why you need to take a break from it. Anyway, welcome back!!!
Thank you for the welcome!
Sorry to disappoint you, and thank you for understanding.