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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
So fun to work with!
I know! Sabina is gonna get herself killed.
But, she’s like that. I mean, remember how spunky she was when she was being a total snark to Aaron and Turin. She hasn’t lost all of that.
still, it scares me when she does stuff like that!
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@raxforge @rae @jonas @whalekeeper @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @grcr
Felicity
“I don’t have time for a conference!” Everyone in this group seemed so distracted. She was ready to just leave on her own, but the tiniest ghost of a sense of survival made her hesitate a few seconds.
“What… Where are you going?” Marcel was up. Or at least tryin…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
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Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)
Pain rung in Marcel’s skull; he felt as if something had woken him up, but he couldn’t hear anything. His ears were definitely bleeding, since his rose-colored hair had begun to clump with a darker color.
Everything was numb. Dark, wet, and…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 month ago
@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @raxforge @keilah-h @rae @whalekeeper @loopylin @theshadow @arcticanimals @theducktator and @liberty
WELCOME, WELCOME ONE AND ALL! Today is the grand release of my funnest project yet! AN INTERACTIVE game show! (well I think they are like a game show…) But what will happen is that there will be 5…[Read more]
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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
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Ben Gunn and Flare – Group 1, Everstrand edge
“When I healed you, the song tells me things about you, not a lot, but some,” Flare came up to Baron’s ear, “You don’t have to worry, I know very little about your past.”
“Wait, hold on,” Ben turned to Flare, “I thought you said i…[Read more]
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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
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Ben Gunn and Flare – Group 1, Everstrand edge
Flare looked confused, “Isn’t that your name? I could’ve sworn it was. Though I guess the spell has been wrong before.” Flare looked like he was pondering.
“Why the heck would it matter if we know your name or not… uuuuuuugh, o…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
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Baron (Brutus)—with Group 1
Brutus froze in his tracks as Flare used his true name. “Wh-what did you just c-call me?” Brutus went as blank as a sheet, almost as if he was going to pass out.
I have no preference of where exactly Jenna goes
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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
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Ben Gunn and Flare – Group 1, Everstrand edge
“We’ll stick with you Baron,” Flare put his hand on his shoulder.
Ben raised his head from his half-sleep, “Who are we sticking with?”
“Baron.”
“Who?”
Flare pointed at Baron, a little frustrated, “This guy!”
“Oh, okay, I’ll b…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @raxforge @keilah-h @rae @whalekeeper @loopylin @theshadow @arcticanimals @theducktator and @liberty
I know I said I wasn’t officially back yet, BUT NOW I AM! I hope you guys had a nice week! And I am happy to announce that I will never EVER take a break from KP again! (Although my life was ten times…[Read more]
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The Ducktator started the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 month ago
In my current WIP, I have 6 MCs right now, but I want to add another one or two. In another one, I have 11, though that one may change. Is this too many? When does the amount of main characters become too many to keep track of?
@whalekeeper @rae @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @raxforge @esther-c @freed_and_redeemed @theshadow @ellette-giselle…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Early 1900s Research in the forum Historical 1 month ago
This is a pretty specific question, I’ll admit. 😅 Any other history nerds? @koshka @esther-c @liberty @mineralizedwritings @otherworldlyhistorian @jonas @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @linus-smallprint @rae
Sorry for the tags if you’re not interested, guys.
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freedom posted a new activity comment 1 month ago
@hybridlore @ellette-giselle @koshka @theducktator @esther-c @rae THANK Y’ALL SO MUCH😭😭💜
I’m so, soooo excited for Book #2 (and Book #3, but shhhh).
and yes, Koshka, I’ll go give Leon some tea and cookies rn. And Riker gets plenty too. 🥰and don’t worry, y’all will be some of the first ones to know when it’s out👀 (or when it’s coming out…I may…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
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Alright, I believe now we are back on track.
I’ll put a little from the previous section in here. We are now back to just after Joseph’s letter to Sabina.
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Sometimes I feel so inadequate teaching the people, especially when I train up Mr. Caddick, Da…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
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Rogun — Elderstrand (Group 1)
Taken aback, Rogun had to bite back an angry retort.
“If we stay here, we will die,” he said. “The Scrabblers will be here in minutes. If you want me to prove that you can trust me, I can’t, but I am bound by my honor to bring you out of this pl…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
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Leon and Julian —with Group 1
Julian slowly rose, his eyes narrowed. He took a few steps forward until he was standing right in front of Rogun. “Listen, I don’t know who you are, stranger, but Leon is hurt, and I think the best option is staying put.”
“Julian,” Leon calle…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
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(I’m not normally going to use NPC POVs very much, but right now, this is more convenient than using Ellis.)
Rogun — Elderstrand (Group 1)
Rogun stopped and turned around as he realized no one was following. Mildly annoyed that the newcomers didn’t seem to grasp the urgency of…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month ago
Yes, Marta is blind. This is a huge hitch in the story………..
I do look for particular quotes like the ones I used, if that’s what you’re asking.
I’m glad I’m giving inspiration! Ooo, that sounds like such a cool story! I’d love to read it sometime! Mine takes place in Germany, because I find there are a lack of stories from…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
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Leon and Julian —with Group 1
Julian crouched by Leon, who was slowly coming too. Everything was happening too fast, and he glanced about widely. “Leon, come on!”
Leon slowly sat up, a hand against his head. “What happened?”
“You got knocked out, and now we have someone knew w…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
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I am so tuned.
I am tuned and holding the radio to my ear.
lol