hybridlore

@whalekeeper

or example, in the series I’m reading, seven books have passed and the heroine has finally realized her crush likes her back. The hints were agonizingly obvious. He was giving you gifts, girl. He initiated a unique telepathic connection with you. His friends have openly joked about your feelings for each other.

Keeper of the Lost Cities?

@esther-c

I’m pretty sure I have more, but here’s nine.

1. NO. MATURE. RELATIONSHIPS. BETWEEN. CHILDREN. I have read about 2 books ever that had elementry/middle school relationships well written. I don’t care if in real life 12 year olds date. I don’t want to read about it.
2. Love at first sight. It’s not love, it’s just attraction.
3. Why are…

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@savannah_grace2009

Lukas 

“No.”

Lukas ran his tongue over his lips. At least he got a clear answer. He had heard from his brothers before that girls would say they were fine when they actually weren’t. If Livia hadn’t answered that way, then that must mean she really wasn’t okay.

“Why?”

By Liv’s expression, that was definitely not t…[Read more]

@koshka

1: love triangles. I find them incredibly unrealistic and often ridiculous.

😭

jk jk. XD I personally don’t mind them if they’re done right. 😉

2: no communication. The entire plot should not be able to be resolved with a 5 minute conversation. Like seriously. This may be a problem in real life, but do I want to real a full 300+ pages abo…

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@elishavet-pidyon

Refugee Rangers/ is an intriguing name. I’m curious. XD

I probably won’t end up calling it that…it’s just a temporary title, as “refugee rangers” is a big part of the story! It’s my newest story idea and one of the best!!!!!!! Lord willing, I am seriously planning on writing and publishing it.

If you would like to know mo…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Thanks for letting me know! It looks like an amazing writer’s film!

@ellette-giselle

I hope being signed up two times isn’t a problem.

I’ve done that before for other things. It shouldn’t be a problem.

@koshka   @whalekeeper

Aannnddd I’m left in the dust. What is it with you night owls?

oh boy, you mention “doctor” and Rory’ll flip out bad.

You don’t want to see that.

Rory

When Barnes actually took off her mask, Rory started in surprise a little. He had been preparing to surprise her and somehow get it off. He needed to see the face b…[Read more]

@esther-c

I agree with @koshka and @elishavet-pidyon

I would also add,

1. A lot of physical contact before marriage

2. Only being able to have a relationship when alone. I prefer that one of the first times this couple is alone is when he asks her to marry him. Show them getting to know each others families, hanging out at church, spending…[Read more]

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Have any of you seen The Man Who Invented Christmas? It’s the story of how Charles Dickens wr…[Read more]

@liberty

Yes, and the weird thing is I got two emails at once both saying the same thing. It’s like my last registration actually went through….. I hope being signed up two times isn’t a problem.

@koshka @ellette-giselle

Barnes

This information had only been guesswork up until this point. Now, Barnes could remember Rory’s file. It had been newer than the others, and very scarce of words.

“Is there a way of convincing them Rory isn’t worth the risk? To them, not us,” she added.

@esther-c

Livia

“Livia, are you okay?”

She blinked hard, still refusing to make eye contact.

She formed the moisture into the form of a horse, letting it gallop around on her palm.

She missed Xandro. 

She let the water fall off her hand and into the churning waters below.

Finally, she let out a shuddering sigh, and turned to face…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Unfortunately, I just realized I’m supposed to be starting homework for the first week of CC, and we were assigned to read 100 pages of history over the break . . . which I haven’t started yet because I didn’t know about it until yesterday 😩

Same thing here. XD I’ve been reading a ton of history and Greek literature so I have enoug…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Oof. Lucille has my sympathies. (I’m going to enjoy calling her that.) Filing stuff stinks. As does doing a job on your own.

Nooo you can’t call her Lucille, she doesn’t like that. XD She’s very used to overworking and not making any friends. Thus the inability to show likable emotions.

@koshka @ellette-giselle

It was h…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ohhhh yeah I understand!!!

Still, I change my book so many times that I’m used to it lollll

YAYYYYYYYYY I’m so excited!!!!!!

@savannah_grace2009

Hehe, thanks 😁😊

Lukas

Lukas watched as Livia played with water between her hands. He was captivated for only a moment before his eyes roved to her face. A listless, wandering look swam behind those bright blue pools.

Lukas knew it would be be easy for her with Xandro not being there–although that was good news for him. He…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Aww, thanks!! 🥰

Sometimes it is for me, but in this book’s particular case, it needs some bigger edits (not like a whole revamp), and I didn’t feel like digging through that. XD

Yeah totally!! I’m hoping to create a topic for it soon! (Which reminds me…you posted something new on your WIP topic that I need to read!!)

@esther-c

Oh boy

1. Guys who are too possessive. I dislike this because there’s a fine line between protectiveness and… almost this sense of greed? The guy will only want the girl for himself and hates on anything that takes up some of her attention.

2. The ideally sweet, quiet, kind girl. Especially if they are the character without a poi…[Read more]