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@ellette-giselle oooh this is so cool!! The only issue being that because of the fact that you have all the parts of the story scattered through the forum, it’s a bit hard for me to sift through all the replies. Is there a document you can put it all on so I can just read through the whole thing? It’s ok if not.

@keilah-h

Sure thing! I’ll put the link here, and you can skim through the chapters to catch up a little.

WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy

@rae lol the way that you listed what your characters are doing as if it was going on in the same house as the dog and your brothers and the cat and the chicken pot pie…..lol

@ellette-giselle Well I thought you’ve posted a couple stories on here, and I don’t know which one specifically Let There Be Light is, but yeah, I’d love it if you tagged me so I can read it!

@keilah-h

why would you get a lot of flak?

Well, let’s just say my beliefs are not popular around my peers. You’d be surprised how mean both guys and girls can be when they disagree on stuff like this. I’ve gotten to the place where I know I’ve just gotta speak the truth in love and brace for the return fire…. which often times is more full of…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint @theshadow @whalekeeper  @savannah_grace2009(I’ll tag you in case you still want to keep reading this)

Ok, here is the next part. It’s pretty short, but i have some edits to run on the part after, which is very long.

It took some time for the crowd to disperse. Only one child had believed, but Aaron was far from discouraged.…

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@ellete-giselle why would you get a lot of flak? You’re right. Females–at least, female humans–were not designed to be active fighters (and for that matter it just wasn’t God’s idea to create the concept of war. That derived from fear and sin after the fall of man).

also I don’t remember what that acronym stand for but if it’s about your…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Ok, I’ll go for it. Thank you for the encouragement. Give me a second to get another scene.

@kathleenramm
I can’t change my cover image either.

@linus-smallprint

So I guess what really would be the case is that their instincts act up when they think they are in danger. If they feel more secure, they are able to control themselves more, even if they really are in more danger.

Ah, I see.

Okay. I hope you are able to deal with that mould and that your 18th birthday goes well. Happy early…

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@linus-smallprint

ah, I’m glad we’re on the same page. I was afraid I was going to get a lot of flack. lol. Tell your brother great job for standing up for something like that in an unpopular time. (You too, as long as he and I are both satisfied by the end. lol.)

Oooo, I love the drawings! They do look a little wingfeatherish. They’re quite…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

ah, I’m glad we’re on the same page. I was afraid I was going to get a lot of flack. lol. Tell your brother great job for standing up for something like that in an unpopular time. (You too, as long as he and I are both satisfied by the end. lol.)

Oooo, I love the drawings! They do look a little wingfeatherish. They’re quite…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Well, it’s not like I won’t read them or y’all are evil for writing them. I just don’t believe it’s right. That’s not to say that women need to be pussy cats or wilting violets, but there is a TONE out there for them to do besides killing each other in battle. Leave the fighting to the men. I am not against Women dispatchers, women…[Read more]

@theducktator

Great Googly Moogly sounds great! Call him GeeGeeMoo if we need to or GGM! I’m sorry everyone, my rational thought has left after two hours of my brothers fighting and knocking down house decorations that have probably been there twenty years. All while I try to draw a charrie named Clare, eat chicken pot pie and watch a movie. Then…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I think she tagged her in the ‘KP glitch problems’ topic.

@smiley cool! I’ll admit I never watched those movies, they were always kinda ehh for me, but I LOVE the concept of the children of canon characters interacting. (I have a sequel planned to the current fic I’m working on which is just that.)

@ellette-giselle lol  I understand why you don’t like women in battle (I imagine things can get rough for them), but uh, just a little disclaimer: A solid portion of the stories being written on here have some form of war, and many of them have both female and male characters fighting in them. I have a few myself. (But then again, my teams tend…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

*sobbing*

@ellette-giselle

Kathleen is the only one who can help and Ducktator tagged her already. So now we must wait.

@highscribeofaetherium

Or how about we find someone to fix the problem…….. lol.