hybridlore

@linus-smallprint

It occurs to me that Sabina and Julian are similar. Both have a brother who became a Christian, and they both thought he had gone crazy, which made them resistant to hearing the gospel and angry at whoever shared it with their brother. So I’m wondering if Sabina is going to recall how she acted and how this may impact her i…

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@keilah-h

plus it all depends on where you caught them in their arcs.

I’m planning to use creative liberties because of this, lol. After all, if some of these people turn violent in the game, that’s not accurate to their canon internal values. This is alternate noncanon; the most moral, innocent character might defenestrate their…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

oh my goodness.

Are you serious?

We can move this conversation to a new forum I guess.

@hybridlore

I write a very wide variety of things.My dystopian stuff is me being a conspiracy theorist.

This one is about a young farmer living in a country that faced Civil War plus a 3rd Word War. The country was split in half and the East in uninhabitable and forbidden, and the West is under dictatorship. The idea of family has been…[Read more]

@hybridlore

It’s called Forbidden.

It’s dystopian.

@linus-smallprint

Oh my goodness.

That is so bad.

I love it!!

@hybridlore

uhu. We’ll see about that.

I’m currently trying to wrap up another novel, but I may post more later. If not, maybe Monday morning.

@hybridlore

Oh no. I will not change my mind.

So I’ll just keep writing away, but if the protection squad activates then I’ll deal with it. lolololol.

@hybridlore

Too bad you didn’t know about this before.

Now you’re too late to save Adrian.

BRAWWWWWHAAAAAH

@hybridlore

You better add that those are my characters, because I know at least Freedom has a Leon. And she’s actually been pretty nice to him.

Lately.

@hybridlore

HEY!!!

I haven’t done anything to them!

yet…………….

lol. Okay, you can have them for now.

I know I’m not super keeping up with this topic, but I’ve been praying for every prayer request that shows up! 🙏 <33

@whalekeeper

Yeah, that makes so much sense!

Oh yeah, I get that. I have a lot of writing knowledge, I just don’t always apply it 💀😂

@hybridlore

The protection squad was formed for Freedom and Godlyfantasy’s characters. Let’s see, I think Riker, Paxton, and….. ugh, I can’t remember. There were a couple other on there. I think Leon got added too. They would go and kidnap them so that Freedom and Godly couldn’t kill them. Then they would have to try to get their characters…[Read more]

@hybridlore

You like Julian and Leon, eh?

Hmmm. *makes dark and devious plans*

lol. just joking.

maybe.

@whalekeeper

 I have some idea of how each character would act in a survival scenario, and everyone wants to survive, buuuuuut I don’t know what each character would wish for.

tbh I’m not sure what my guys would wish for either. They’re confusing.

plus it all depends on where you caught them in their arcs.

@hybridlore

I know I did.

Someone threatened to add Rory to the protection squad, but I think Joseph needs it the most. lololol.

@esther-c

Awesommme, I’m glad that worked. For me, I want to add description in longer paragraphs because they have a softer sense of time, and you can afford to give the information in a solid chunk. And then like you said, actions and dialogue are shorter.

Not that I always follow my own thoughts! Buuut verbalizing this might help me stay consistent.

@hybridlore

Oh go ahead and keep reading. I was meaning you aren’t someone who has gotten backstory detail because you asked too many questions and I gave in and answered. lolololol.

Yes! You are completely correct. Except they were betrothed. They were supposed to be married the month after she died. So, yeah, that was the initial blow, and…[Read more]