hybridlore

@jonas

I was thinking of adding two more characters and sending Felicity on a short rescue mission for one of them, but I’ve been delaying it. If I do that now, would that completely derail your plans? I can figure out a different way to introduce them if you’d rather

@rae @esther-c

I really miss this RP…is it still going??? And is there any way that I can bring Sef and Liv back…? 👀👀👀

@trailblazer

That is so cool!!!! That sounds amazing!!!!!

@loopylin

Thank you so much <333

Yesssss! I ate too much food lol

@jonas

Oh okay!

That’s not the reason anymore I guess 😂 I actually forgot I said that…a lot has changed lol

That makes sense though, I understand what you’re saying!

Oh, and as for why I changed the ending instead of them abandoning Lilitu…

There are a couple reasons why I did that. Maybe they’re not good reasons lol but I’m going to leave it, at least for now so I can play with it. I think it will make the story make a little bit more sense  in the future so I’m just going to leave it for now.

@hybridlore

Thank youuu!

@highscribe

I think this is really good! You have some really nice prose.

Thank you so much!

I corrected the things you suggested and you’re right, I think it will flow a lot better! Thank you so much, you have been very helpful! <3

@jonas

I think I asked before why he insisted on this, and you said that it was to sweeten the deal for Kaden. Personally, I feel like you should show Kaden as having more hesitation if this is going to work. To me, it seems like they have already made up their minds to become Pythonos. Sure, they’re scared, but to me, it still doesn’t convey a s…

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@jonas @highscribeofaetherium

Oh my goodness you guys are so good!!!!

I actually have noticed a couple of the things you’ve said before but for some reason I forgot to change them… *facepalm* I’ll go fix them now before I forget again lol!

@savannah_grace2009

I think this is really good! You have some really nice prose.

The sensation made her want to scream, cry out in agony…

You don’t really need an ellipsis here. A period would work better.

“It’s those cursed Paynes,” Odessa muttered, anger flashing in her violet eyes.

This makes it sound like Kaden and Sevryn have tried to get…[Read more]

@loopylin

It is very cute ambience. I listened to it half-asleep in my bed. It also has Wirt&Greg lore, things like Greg sneaking in to help record.

@loopylin

All corrections noted, thank yooouuu. The second line does look weird; that should be the imperative form but the rest of the sentence still feels clunky. I will bring it up in class.

Just curious, what curriculum are you taking? Do you use the Familia Romana book?

I do! My co-op uses Henle, but I couldn’t learn anything from it. Really…[Read more]

@power

YOU ASKED FOR IT.

*Tips hat* All power to you, my dear sir.

@jonas I really appreciate how you manage to keep track of everyone

@power

I’m looking forward to your prompt!

@theshadow

Sorry, I forgot to put the “the” in my post above!

Great work on your story, as well! From what Ellette said, I’ll have to go back to read it again!

@power

Congratulations!!!! Yes, I agree with everything Ellette said about your story! It was very touching!

@shadow

Great work on your story, as well! From what Ellette said, I’ll have to go back to read it again!

@linus-smallprint

btw, why isn’t the new Alan in your art collection?!?

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Well, the deadline is passed, so I think I’m gonna judge the three stories that were submitted.

in particular order……

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@linus-smallprint

COME ON YOU TWO! SHUT UP AND GET OUT OF THERE!

Okay Linus, now I’m mad.

I KNEW IT! I knew he was going to try to convince Alan to go back to magic, I just didn’t know why, or that it was such a big deal!

You have me a little panicked and thoroughly intrigued.You foretold this well and set the stage in a solid and…[Read more]