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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
I’d give you cake, but that would be a lie, and then I’d end up being sued by GLaDOS, and that is a fight I can’t win, so sorry. I hope you had a good birthday though!
Portal mention eeeeeeee
I haven’t played the games yet (I like puzzle games) but I like listening to their soundtracks. They’re so weird and synth-y.
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Enid replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Will keep questions in mind 👍
Glad to hear! Tyn was a character I didn’t like much in the first draft and I was considering changing her a lot until I got near the end of it and she went through some really interesting character development. I think in the draft two versions I understood her more.
I think she’s really fun, but I…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I’m going to guess neither of you minds what happens 😛
Barnes
Her sight flooding back to her, Barnes found one of her wrists was held by one of the magical tendrils. Her other hand was free, and Reid was recovering from a hit to the face.
In front of them, the snake lay on the ground. Its eyes faded from blue to a cloudy…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
My sister managed to get away with one-word answers for the questions I did for my first draft
lol. That sounds like my brother.
I’m on it. Give me one sec….
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Rant Room for Baker Family Adventures Fans!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
one older brother
LUCKYYYYYYY!!!!! That’s why I like Phil so much. He’s my fictional older brother.
I’m the oldest with two younger brothers and a younger sister.
My friend actually had Summer of Suspense and lent it to me. I liked it so much I looked up the author to see if she wrote anything else, and then I discovered it was…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
OH IT IS SO GOOD!
You must read it!
You won’t be able to put it down. It is stressful!!!
(Peder is my favorite character by the way.)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
No! I’ve never been to Highland games. That sounds AMAZING!
Have you?
My dad has the German. Our last name is actually German, and I look very German, though my brothers take after the highlander and irish side.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Mainly just feedback. I have an actually editor who can catch typos, but if you see anything then you can mention it.
I hope Amelia doesn’t die.
Oh dear.
That would be an interesting twist—if everyone thinks she’s going to have the plague, but then she really ends up having a baby. But we shall see.
Hmm, it would be.…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
What kind of feedback are you looking for? Do you want just a chill overview of what I think, or more detailed and critique-ish?
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Liberty replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I was just talking about your Scottish heritage with Joy, one of my older sisters, and she wanted to know if you go to any Highland Games.
Do you?
By the way, your clan motto is amazing! It’s so cool that they were Covenanters. We can’t say that for our clan. Though we know there were some Sutherland covenanters, the majority…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
No, I haven’t read it! I was just looking at the preview a few days ago, and suddenly thought, “Hey! Isn’t this the picture on Ellette’s profile?”
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Liberty replied to the topic Rant Room for Baker Family Adventures Fans!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Also, how did you first learn about the BFA?
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Liberty replied to the topic Rant Room for Baker Family Adventures Fans!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
By the way, how many siblings do you have? Are you the oldest?
I have four siblings: two older sisters, one older brother, and one younger sister.
I’m right in between my brother and younger sister.
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Liberty replied to the topic Rant Room for Baker Family Adventures Fans!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Is that good or bad? lolol
Alastair isn’t Gollum! *gasp* how horrid!
It’s not that Alastair is Gollum. Just the name “The Hunt for Alastair” brought “The Hunt for Gollum” to mind.
giggles sheepishly.
Well, being German as well as Scottish, I have a special place for Scots and Germans. Though I may be partial to German boy…
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Liberty replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh this is WAY better then Mufasa!
Okay…I’ll see what I think.
No, I haven’t. My family is waiting for a time when we can watch it without my very little sister. She couldn’t see a movie like that!
Gotcha.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh this is WAY better then Mufasa!
No, I haven’t. My family is waiting for a time when we can watch it without my very little sister. She couldn’t see a movie like that!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Rant Room for Baker Family Adventures Fans!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Gahahaha!!! It’s sounds like Legolas and Aragorn looking for Gollum!
Is that good or bad? lolol
Alastair isn’t Gollum! *gasp* how horrid!
Hey…when you said this something struck me. Do you like Rolf so much because he’s German? *grin* I mean, this just reminds me of your German couple!
giggles sheepishly.
Well, being German as we…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh! My father and older siblings went and saw Bonhoeffer. I was too busy to go, but I’m planning on seeing it later. They said it was AMAZING. My oldest sister especially loved it! It was SO moving. Have you seen it yet?
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Liberty replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Ah, okay! Thanks! From what you said about it, I’ll definitely be checking it out! My siblings and I will probably watch it during our parents next date night. That or Mufasa.
Have you seen Mufasa yet? I’m really excited to see it!
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Liberty replied to the topic Rant Room for Baker Family Adventures Fans!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
We need The Hunt For Alastair, or something like that. Maybe Fergus and Jigson team up to find him!!
Gahahaha!!! It’s sounds like Legolas and Aragorn looking for Gollum!
No, no, no! No Fergus and Abby. They would never work. They would kill each other!
Wait…seriously? Kill each other? But I totally agree. They wouldn’t make t…[Read more]
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