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@ellette-giselle

Great! That’s a great trope to break.

Ernst is the name of Josef’s son in CR, right?

@theducktator

 I just finished your prologue. It’s good, but you overuse italics.

NOOOOOO
IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO USE ITALICS

😱😱😱😱

*sobs hysterically*

Oh my goodness, they kissed!!!!

yesssss

*coughs* um yeah…chapter three is kinda dark I guess 😂😂

@liberty

Yeah, it must be the fact that I’m breaking a story trope where the wild animals always attack.

Yep! This is a German/Roman hybrid. The German just hasn’t come out much until now.

And…you created another Ernst?

Sorry?

@ellette-giselle

I just read your latest section. I was struck by how German their names are!😂 And…you created another Ernst?

Haha! I’ve had others complain that the wolves DIDN’T attack! XD.

Then, I’m extremely glad I told you my input. The animals do not have to attack every single time! *shaking head* So unrealistic.

@liberty

I think Leon should be the one to try explaining things. It would seem to fit his character…and give him something to say since he doesn’t say anything until “Julian, run!”

Leon is still trying to gather his thoughts and figure out what Julian just jumped into…. lol.

Got that about the river.

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Perhaps I’ll share it on here if i ever follow through with anything…

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@keilah-h

Hmm, I will remember to choose a fork for a weapon next time someone throws me into a tournament.

@ellette-giselle

My thoughts on Section 2:

“We don’t believe in the gods of the Empire,” Julian cut in.

There was a stunned silence.

“We worship the One true God,” Julian explained.

I think Leon should be the one to try explaining things. It would seem to fit his character…and give him something to say since he doesn’t say anything until “Ju…[Read more]

@koshka

All people are weird in their own way, some more dramatically than others. It’s the “normal” ones that usually scare me.

Those are the kinds of people who are average and forgettable enough to be spies, you see.

@loopylin

Why thank you. Glad to be your local online conundrum ✨

<3

@ellette-giselle

Loopy never seemed weird to me.

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@keilah-h

Oh I thought it was funny. No worries!

@whalekeeper lollllll

I think I’m the oddest one out of my real life friend group, although I do have a friend who knows several ways to kill someone with a fork.

@whalekeeper   @loopylin

wHaT!??

Loopy never seemed weird to me.

Funny thing, Whaley, I couldn’t make head or tale of YOU for forever!! Still not sure if i have.  XD

@koshka I don’t remember the lyrics very well, but I read that the band does a lot of anti-human trafficking charity work

@ellette-giselle Whoops, didn’t mean I wanted to whack you specifically.

Sorry.

@whalekeeper

Why thank you. Glad to be your local online conundrum ✨

Except @loopylin

She’s an absolute weirdo, don’t know what to make of her

@koshka @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

I was plopped into this world with many weird friends – a pyrotechnician and a chronic tea drinker among them – so the people on here are pretty normal in my eyes.

@keilah-h

Oh Cricky!

I never knew you wanted to whack me!

lolololol

@koshka yep that’s us

@ellette-giselle good! We’re your friends, even if we disagree occasionally and feel like we wanna reach through the screen and whack each other. lol

@koshka

Exactly.

Y’all on here are the only friends I’ve got who don’t think I’m weird or crazy.