hybridlore

@hybridlore

Leon!!!! Yes!!!

I’m guessing this means you’re happy with what he did?

lolol

Great section. He must have been really famous…

Oh he was. You see, he was the White Knight, and the White Knight –––––––––––––––––––––––

So yeah, that would explain it.

@savannah_grace2009

haha!

Well thanks for understanding. I’ll try to read it as soon as possible, but I’m not sure when that will be.

@ellette-giselle

For some reason I thought of you IMMEDIATELY (probably because we’ve had so many conversations about slapping your writing on paper and NEVER GOING BACK (something that I struggle to not do since I’m a perfectionist lol))

It’s okay!!! I completely understand and I can’t even imagine how hard the past few weeks have been for…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Ooohhh, that’s convenient. XD Thank you!

I woke up sick so I might not make it

@stephie

Ok here are some of my initial thoughts- I haven’t thought about this all fully, but this is what comes to mind after reading what everyone else has said thus far.

I agree with what @savannah_grace2009 said about stating what you believe rather than immediately coming against someone else. Often if someone feels attacked, they put up…[Read more]

and Leon takes the plunge.

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION!!!

 

“Oh, it is good to be back!” Rolf exclaimed as he reclined with the others about the fire.

“How is your village?” Johannes asked as he leaned forward to stoke the blaze.

“It is doing well. The winter was a hard one and took some of…

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@liberty

 

Ooh…we’re getting to see a little bit of Leon’s past!

YES!

Any thoughts on that?

No, they moved into the University for the winter. I mentioned it at one point, but you may have missed it. 😉

@liberty

I LOVE IT!!!

So excited!

@stephie

absulutly.

It just really matters how you go about saying that. If we are to speak truth and proclaim Jesus, that means we need to discredit false gods. God is not One among many. There is only ONE.

But yeah, it depends on how you go about doing so and if you’re antagonistic about it or do it in a loving and kind way. And again,…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

🤣🤣

Also, I’m so sorry I haven’t been reading! Life has been WILD!

I’m a bit late to this.

My art definitely bleeds into my writing a lot. All of my stories have some sort of color palette in my mind, and a lot of my characters, especially from Paper Stars, started as drawings I made. (Ex. Dante, Lemonhead, Mel) And my obsession with turning my old school work into origami stars a few years ago is what inspired…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ok! Yeah, again, do what you wanna do. But if you want some ideas or need a brainstorming partner just lmk!

I will!!! TYSM!!! 🙃

Yes I totally get it!! You definitely don’t have to go through and try to fix everything in the first draft 🥴

ahhhh hahaha yeah, I’d definitely get in trouble with @ellette-giselle if I did that…. (jk jk h…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Haha sounds familiar… I think I can put a real political event or name to almost everything you just mentioned!

Lol, same. Most of that wasn’t even intentional. I just decided that the government would be similar to ours, and things escalated from there. XD

@esther-c

Ohhhh my wordddd

Ok that actually makes so much sense. I felt like the story was moving too fast and wasn’t exactly sure how to slow it down.

Thanks for pointing that out!! <33

Glad I was able to help!!!!!

I do love your dialogue though…you’re so talented in that area!!! Just maybe breaking it up would help A LOT. Because too much o…[Read more]

@stephie

I feel like it totally depends on the situation.

Though, at least for me, something doesn’t feel right about saying “your religion is wrong and false.” Because that tends to get people defensive and push them away from Jesus. I feel way more comfortable with saying “I believe that there is only one God….(etc…)” and just sharing what…[Read more]

@stephie

It depends. I would say usually yes but fighting on the internet never convinces anyone, and sometimes it’s just best to be quiet. I also don’t think you should go up to someone who’s clearly of a different religion and randomly tell them off. But if it comes up in conversation or court or somewhere, absolutely.

@esther-c

In my first draft I actually never wrote a scene of their first study sesh together…do you think I should add that in for the second draft??

WHAT??? I was looking forward to reading that sooo bad!

Even you were wrong, but believed you were right, I still think it would be good to disagree with the other person.

All of what I said still depends on the situation and the intentions of the people involved, though.