hybridlore

@linus-smallprint

Julian is certainly a blame others type, considering his reaction to Adrian’s death. Leon, I’m not so sure about it.

Yes, very much so.

I’m not really sure either. He’s somewhere in the middle honestly.

No. We still have it, though we haven’t played it for a while. We just ignore the story when we do play it.

Ah, one of those…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

he’ll go doggedly on.

I was stunned for almost a week and didn’t think clearly.

(again, different person. But trauma does weird things)

@linus-smallprint

I don’t think it would be out of character. Like Ellette said, he’d probably be too distraught and traumatized to think straight. But if he did stop for the night, he’d probably realize it wasn’t safe, and go someplace else.

@whalekeeper

Oh my goodness, the tea one! 🤣🤣🤣

@raxforge

Oh my word.

Why are all your characters so messed up?!?!

(quickly hides Rory because he’s totally not messed up)

😂😝

@whalekeeper

Horse what???

What did I just see?

@hybridlore

You’re welcome! I’d love to see Everette in a bind like that, and maybe someone surprising like Cole (could be a really cool moment) is like, “hold on a sec, he got less time then the rest of us,” or something like that.

Just a thought. It could show an interesting angle on the dislike of any sort of Christian beliefs or standings.…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Nope.

I wouldn’t think so.

I think he’ll run until he drops (basiclly) and then he’ll either be so dead tired that he sleeps hard, or he’ll fight nightmares and flashbacks. I don’t think he’ll have time to think about this sort of things.

Out of experience, when you go through trauma parts of your mind just kind of turn off…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Haha. That’s funny. we’re complete opposite! I struggle with never ever ever being wrong. Ever. Things just “happen to me” and often times “the world just hates me and is out to get me.” 😂

I have never struggled with blaming myself for something, but rather blaming others when it’s my fault or when blame isn’t even supposed…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ah, yes… Fire Face😂 The name is so weird yet I’ve made no attempts to fix it XD. Writing the burning of the castle was fun😆

@linus-smallprint

Considering the circumstances, I don’t think the above will go through his mind. I think he’ll run there because that’s the only place he can go really, and he’s going to be having a really, really hard time. It’s going to be surprising if he thinks clearly enough to get back there without getting lost or injured. Then he gets…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Is it bad that it was reversed?

I’m not convinced by Julian telling Dian the gospel in that moment

Ugh.

I had that feeling as I was editing it.

Hmm…. I might possibly chuck that section altogether………..

So is it bad that Julian responded differently?

Well….. I think that might be because that tends to be w…[Read more]

@esther-c

I’m loving this story! It has a warm and cozy feel but also real challenges high schoolers face.

Easton brought his sand bike to a halt a few feet from the campfire the rest were beginning to set up. He removed his helmet, shaking out his hair.

OK I was majorly confused here at first- I didn’t know who “the rest” was referring to until…[Read more]

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Leon woke in the darkness. He heard Rolf breathing and felt the rocking of the ship below him. He sat up, wondering where they were going and what fate lay ahead. Leon leaned against the side of the ship’s hold and drew his knees to his chest,…

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@liberty

I think so! Send it!

@ellette-giselle

Yes! That song really goes up and down. Have you learned “Not Alone”? (the most epic Christian girl song ever…)

@stephie

*Laughs* Sounds like you know how to steel the show.

@liberty

Yeah I know. At first I could never see it fitting, but the more I listened to it the more I kept thinking about these guys, (specifically Leon for some reason) so now it has to be the book theme song, because I think about them every time. 😂

Ah, I get it.

We didn’t do Aladdin because of the clothing the girls are wearing. I have…[Read more]