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@liberty @jonas @highscribeofatherium @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle

Thanks everyone!!!

You guys can use the link on my profile to read it, and then post any comments here, if that works?

@esther-c

What’s a reasonable deadline? There’s 19 chapters as of now, with more to come lol

It depends on how fast you can read XDXD

@theducktator

NO. MATURE. RELATIONSHIPS. BETWEEN. CHILDREN. I have read about 2 books ever that had elementry/middle school relationships well written. I don’t care if in real life 12 year olds date. I don’t want to read about it.

TELL ME ABOUT IT. It’s insane how often you’ll find those in books and it’s really just ridiculous. 🥱…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ahhh that’s so funny lol

Livia

“Thanks,” she exhaled hard. “Sorry, I didn’t mean to dump all this on you. But yeah, that’s why I’ve been acting weird.”

@savannah_grace2009 (Almost tagged you @Livia XD)

Lukas

Lukas chewed on his lips for a moment, resting his elbows on the bridge railing. The river gurgled by, providing fresh water for the fountain in the middle of the courtyard. He tried to get the words flowing as fast as this river, but nothing was coming to him. Whenever Lukas was…[Read more]

@koshka ooooh very cool!!

@savannah_grace2009

If you gave me a deadline, I’d be totally down for it! Sometimes I’m busy with school and whatnot, but if I have a deadline, I’ll be sure to get to it and give you some feedback!

@smiley good idea

I rarely go onto those sites too and if I do it’ll be specifically for a fic that has no shipping or that I’ve researched and know it’s clean shipping

and ugh I knowwwww nobody ever finishes their fanfics

like I read this one a little while ago that had a good plot and the characters were pretty accurate to the original…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 I wouldn’t mind!

kinda like how the Half-life games and Portal games are technically in the same universe but what you do in one has literally no bearing on the other.

(sorry for that seemingly random analogy, I was busy writing a fanfic using that story universe earlier, possibly a sequel to my TF2 one)

@rae oh okay, cool!!

@keilah-h

He’s still a character of Wond, but otherwise he’s unrelated to my other stories.

@keilah-h @theshadow

okay so I will say that I completely agree with the fanfiction thing, likes it’s awful what they put in there

of if I ever go onto the websites I put it at lowest and sometimes the second lowest age rating cause anything above that is awful

but overall I just don’t go on them cause nobody ever finishes them anyways lol…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yes, I’d love to. I’m not great at suggestions/critique, but I’ll do what I can to help.

@savannah_grace2009

I’d be willing to help for sure! I may not have a tone of time, but I’ll do what I can!

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle

Thank you for the feedback! I’m about to go edit the short story the scene is in, so this will be very helpful.

@savannah_grace2009

Sure thing! I may not be able to get it to right away…at least all of it, but I’m willing to help you!

Okay, guys…I’m just going to start tagging everyone I can think of lol

Would anyone be interested in reading through/critiquing/giving suggestions on my WIP?

I love writing, but it’s hard to write when I’m not sure if people would even be interested in reading it or if it’s actually trash lollll

Not that I care what people think, but it…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Thanks!!!

Aubrielle’s her older sister.

@rae

Amazing scene! And I agree with Whaley. Not too repetitive, but maybe substitute a few of those “Fathers” with something like, “The man” or something. Not too much of that either, but just enough to brake up the monotony of “Father”