hybridlore

@theshadow thanks lol

they’re hilarious together ngl. also they probably have joint ownership of like 5 brain cells lol

Hey guys, I’ve been thinking. How do you encourage a reader to like a character who is already dead? And with minimal flashbacks? And and without being boringly sad? I have a few ideas, but this has been a challenge so far and I was wondering what everyone else thinks.

@theshadow

I’ll try to get to it!

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Sorry I’m a bit late today! I had a lot going on.

@rae

Yep. Poor Sniper.

ikr, poor guy.

i love how it’s just like:

the character: is a literal assassin and would know like 10 ways to kill me if I got within a mile of him. Plus my augmentations to him give him two or three more of those ways to kill me.

me: I feel so bad for you, your life is so tragic. I would give you a hug if I weren’t con…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Haha, Evan is great.

I find it odd that the others blend. I would get that with Jason and Brian because they aren’t around as much, but I’m surprised Ron and Michael do.

Interesting.

@keilah-h

lol you know me well don’t ya?

i hope so. XD. i try to pay to attention to people’s charries…even when I forget the world lore…

I’m assuming you saw that image in the school roleplay lol.

Yep. Poor Sniper.

Also, thinking of Sniper getting shot, it hit me yesterday but Medic is definitely a parody of how real army medics will do<…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Okay. My limit is 4 hours of constant activity before I get tired. Then I need naps and food to get me back to normal again. If I’m not doing too much, I can make it through the day fine, but my stamina is terrible…again.

Otherwise, all’s good.

thx.

Alright, here is my feedback!

~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

You know Tyn and Cyrus were my favorites from the previous book. In this book, I enjoyed James and Eric (post-memory wipe), both for their enthusiasm. Iskyagus was fun as well for the brief moment he was there.

~ Were there any c…

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@hybridlore

Now that you’ve seen a good bit of them, what do you think of the guys (and girl) on Jonathan’s team?

@hybridlore

I know.

But he is kind of being blind and self pitying. He does need to see that he’s not the only one who’s been hurt.

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@rae

Yeah, I wondered if it was Sniper.

lol you know me well don’t ya?

If I remember correctly, he was shot in the chest and the side of his abdomen, right?

I’m assuming you saw that image in the school roleplay lol. I think that’s right. I don’t think he was hit in the heart directly, but yeah, I assumed it punctured one of the big arteries…[Read more]

UPDATE

Had my blood drawn for the blood tests yesterday. All went well except they couldn’t do one because I’m under 18, which makes no sense. It was only a heavy metals panel (which I wanted done cuz I have had problems with heavy metals before, and are prone to them) but I don’t understand why there was an age limit to it, and there was no…[Read more]

@keilah-h

How do you know all that shooting stuff, first of all?

I researched GSW’s a year or two ago for a character. He had been shot in the knee, shattering his patella and making it hard for him to walk without a brace by my lore. I wanted to see if that was really a thing (turns out, a form of torture is actually shooting someone behind the…[Read more]

@rae

Yesssss, pictures! Those names are so cute!!!!

@esther-c

I’m pretty sure the authorities have me flagged. I had to do a “sell an element” project a couple years ago, and I chose polonium, which meant researching how to buy it, and also given the fact I chose to sell it specifically for murdering people, I researched how much it would take to kill someone too. XD If you want to learn how to…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Yes, and yet they handle it so differently.

@rae How do you know all that shooting stuff, first of all?

Second, thanks! Trying to figure this out cause remember in that fanfic I shared with you, that scene where the enemy team shoots Sniper? I’m writing scenes from his perspective and want to know exactly how long he would be able to remain conscious before passing out and eventually…[Read more]

@rae oh cool!