hybridlore

@ellette-giselle ohhhhh

that makes sense

also I like the covers for the books!

@ellette-giselle exactly how i like them lol

@theducktator that’s a good plan

@highscribeofaetherium @koshka haha I guess “not eating them” is a color then lol

@koshka

Look. you got under 200 words.

I’m not going any shorter.

I hardly got to say anything I wanted.

It’s awful, isn’t it.

In the city of Edran, the government had imposed strict control, monitoring every word and action. Daniel, Shelton, and Ezra Darman were not ready to cower. Their goal was clear: disrupt the government’s…

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@ellette-giselle

I’d love feedback on the blurb. I want it to catch your attention, but not give too much away. Here you go.

WOW. Yes, it has totally caught my attention, and I’m hooked! It sounds very interesting. I think you wrote it quite well. It’s not too long and doesn’t give much away, but it offers the readers a huge tasty donut to hook o…[Read more]

@koshka

Have you ever heard of the six word story? I don’t remember who wrote it, but one of his friends challenged him to write the shortest story ever. He replied with “Baby shoes for sale. Never worn.”

That seriously sounds like a heap of fun! It’s actually a good exercise to try writing very concisely. I think I’ll try this out.…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

A girl in red plaid sits in the college library. Dreadful words – Assignment Due Tomorrow and Proyecto de Clase de Español? -waltz across the screen before her weary eyes. Those words have no business in libraries. Her sanctuary is become her prison. She sighs and clicks on her phone.

Smack

A wet clod of wintery chill flies in…

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@koshka

you beast! I’v tossed ten stories since I last posted.

100 words! are you kidding! What kinda story is that!

My shortest one was 400, and I hardly set the stage.

@koshka

Don’t tempt me to repeat the actions of Flint in the video I just sent. I feel like y’all are picking on me.

What on earth!! You hit me with a snowball and then demand flash fiction!!!! My worst nightmare!

How. Dare. You.

@hybridlore

Thanks so much!!!

I don’t eat bananas either, but when I do they have to be a little after the bright all yellow… like beginning to soften (and barely turn brown, not too brown at all).

@freed_and_redeemed

You got tagged above. ☝️

Shucks.

I changed Ruth’s name to Hope in one sentence. I was almost positive I had on accident.

@hybridlore

I know I included a longer passage, but that is something that I think I’m going to do in some situations. I want to have God’s word very clearly there, backing what I’m saying. I do have the scripture passages indented in the actual book, so it will be easier for a reader to just skim if they wanted.

Okay, I can work on the…[Read more]

Wow. I never realized this was such a debate. I thought the answer was pretty simple.

Don’t eat bananas.

Kidding. Kind of.

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

Okay Linus, I put that part in that you suggested. I plan on having it just after Stephen and David bring their friends, and I left part of that in this section so you can get the flow. I hope this fixes the problem you mentioned.

Thoughts Anyone?

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@liberty

Thank you. I love to draw. 🙂

See ya! Looking forward to your reply!

@whalekeeper

Netflix was going to make a movie or television series more recently, but there hasn’t been any news in a couple years.

Yes, I heard about that, but then nothing more came out!

We watched a little bit of that cartoon recently, lol. Redwall was such a phase for me when I was 10-12; I read almost all the books, and I thinky favorite w…

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@liberty

We sure do!!!!

Here’s the back to The Crimson Rose.

I’d love feedback on the blurb. I want it to catch your attention, but not give too much away. Here you go.

 
Three Stories. One War. One Faith.
In the shadow of World War II, Josef faces a terrible choice. Desperate to avoid the inevitable conscription to the Eastern Front,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

WOW! You drew the TCMW cover?? That’s amazing! Okay…I’ll respond to the large post you sent in reply to me…but right now I have to go take care of Buddy and start my working day! See you later!

@ellette-giselle

You watch Tintin????!!!! And Liberty’s Kids??

So, the the Crimson Rose about Nazi resistance?