hybridlore

@linus-smallprint lol that raccoon

@linus-smallprint

You’re very welcome.

Also, why does that racoon picture have an expression that so fits what I know of you? lolololol.

@linus-smallprint

I have the same thought as Hybrid here. Beric has not only been independent for a while now, but he is also a teen. I’m glad you included the scene of his struggle to listen.

Thanks. It actually wasn’t in the first or second draft. I had a reference made to it in the third, but I thought I should flush it out into a full s…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Sounds good!

I’ll see if I can get at least one of your new sections done today.

Wonderful!! Thanks! Looking forward to it!

@linus-smallprint

Also, what about Andrew Peterson’s Carry the Fire? We both agreed on that one.

Okay yeah, we did. That one is a great song.

Oh, looks like you mentioned the editor question. Ignore my second offer. I thought you might have missed it.Glad you found a good person for the job!

😉

@linus-smallprint

I don’t know how to send doc. links. so, here are my answers.

The Narrow Path Trilogy: Book One – The Cost Feedback Questions

Character

~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Alan. Because he was the redemption character, and I LOVE redemption characters. If you look at my…[Read more]

@whalekeeper yess Tyn is awesome

IDK why, I just like her.

Oliver is my other favorite but that’s probably cause he’s an Australian lizard and you know how I feel about both of those things.

@linus-smallprint

I’d give you cake, but that would be a lie, and then I’d end up being sued by GLaDOS, and that is a fight I can’t win, so sorry. I hope you had a good birthday though!

Portal mention eeeeeeee

I haven’t played the games yet (I like puzzle games) but I like listening to their soundtracks. They’re so weird and synth-y.

@linus-smallprint

Will keep questions in mind 👍

Glad to hear! Tyn was a character I didn’t like much in the first draft and I was considering changing her a lot until I got near the end of it and she went through some really interesting character development. I think in the draft two versions I understood her more.

I think she’s really fun, but I…[Read more]

@rae @theshadow

I’m going to guess neither of you minds what happens 😛

Barnes

Her sight flooding back to her, Barnes found one of her wrists was held by one of the magical tendrils. Her other hand was free, and Reid was recovering from a hit to the face.

In front of them, the snake lay on the ground. Its eyes faded from blue to a cloudy…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

My sister managed to get away with one-word answers for the questions I did for my first draft

lol. That sounds like my brother.

I’m on it. Give me one sec….

@liberty

one older brother

LUCKYYYYYYY!!!!! That’s why I like Phil so much. He’s my fictional older brother.

I’m the oldest with two younger brothers and a younger sister.

My friend actually had Summer of Suspense and lent it to me. I liked it so much I looked up the author to see if she wrote anything else, and then I discovered it was…[Read more]

@liberty

OH IT IS SO GOOD!

You must read it!

You won’t be able to put it down. It is stressful!!!

(Peder is my favorite character by the way.)

@liberty

No! I’ve never been to Highland games. That sounds AMAZING!

Have you?

My dad has the German. Our last name is actually German, and I look very German, though my brothers take after the highlander and irish side.

@hybridlore

Mainly just feedback. I have an actually editor who can catch typos, but if you see anything then you can mention it.

I hope Amelia doesn’t die.

Oh dear.

That would be an interesting twist—if everyone thinks she’s going to have the plague, but then she really ends up having a baby. But we shall see.

Hmm, it would be.…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

What kind of feedback are you looking for? Do you want just a chill overview of what I think, or more detailed and critique-ish?

@ellette-giselle

I was just talking about your Scottish heritage with Joy, one of my older sisters, and she wanted to know if you go to any Highland Games.

Do you?

By the way, your clan motto is amazing! It’s so cool that they were Covenanters. We can’t say that for our clan. Though we know there were some Sutherland covenanters, the majority…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

No, I haven’t read it! I was just looking at the preview a few days ago, and suddenly thought, “Hey! Isn’t this the picture on Ellette’s profile?”

@ellette-giselle

Also, how did you first learn about the BFA?

@ellette-giselle

By the way, how many siblings do you have? Are you the oldest?

I have four siblings: two older sisters, one older brother, and one younger sister.

I’m right in between my brother and younger sister.