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Also, your recent chapters were great! It’s good to see that more and more of the empire is turning to God, but I can’t help but wonder if you’re setting them up with nice things only to have it all come crashing down later…….Knowing you XD

@ellette-giselle

the women’s draft (in which case I will go under ground and change my author’s name)

I don’t know if that’ll be helpful (if you mean drafting for war). You can’t exactly change your author name to a man’s….and even if you did, they’d probably try to draft “him” lol.

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On the topic of the sixth story: My cousin went through a self-harm attempt once. I don’t know about the details, but she is still alive so that’s gotta count for something. That story is kinda personal to me now that I see something that could drive someone over the edge.

When I have bad days, days where it seems so dark and hopeless, I…

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@savannah_grace2009 Arcane and Alder are good name switches! I like them. Also, are you going to keep the Payne and Pythonos references? I think you should; when you publish your book people will be like “oh, this is an expansion on that universe.”

also I read your next few chapters!! They’re great!

@hybridlore thanks!

@hybridlore

It’s true! The way you write… I can see it all clearly in my mind! It really IS like a movie!

Gotta agree with Ellette on this. You write very clearly.

@hybridlore

Yeah, I did get a feeling he didn’t love what he was doing when he was talking with Cole.

Hey, that is the best way to write. Keep at it!

@hybridlore

It’s true! The way you write… I can see it all clearly in my mind! It really IS like a movie!

So… was it obvious before this chapter what Alec did for his job?

I knew he did something with technology and people, and I knew he worked with the government. This didn’t come as a surprise to me at all. It was good.

@hybridlore

GIRL!

How do you do it?!?!

I am so hooked! OH MY WORD! I want this made into a MOVIE!!

Wow! This is so cool. I’m worried about Everett! I hope he makes it out of this one okay. What I wouldn’t give to be in his head as he reads through all those questions!!

AND ALEC!!! Oh my word! This is great!!

@hybridlore

Thank you so much!!!!

I fixed the spelling!! Thanks for catching that XD
I appreciate you so so SO much, girl <3

@koshka @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @theducktator @keilah-h @theshadow @anyone-else

Thank you everyone for your comments on the doc!!

The reason I haven’t added anything new is because I moved it all to Reedsy. Reedsy will professionally typeset it all, and have a more professional look to it, and I like Reedsy better for writing.

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@hybridlore

*Scream of pleasure!!!*

@hybridlore

KP is breaking for everyone. *gasp* this might be the end!!!!

Only killed off at least four pretty important characters in only two books. (Prince guy, Turin, Aaron, Adrian.) Nearly killed off all your main characters. And stated that the next two books would be even darker. 😑

*indignant sniff*

@hybridlore

“What? What did I do?” *in very innocent voice.*

@hybridlore

Yeah, good point. Maybe add something in their journal entries about how it went well, and how Leon is proud of Julian? Something like that.

Sounds good.

*eyes you suspiciously*

*grins evilly*

@hybridlore

Oh good. It’s been glitching all morning on my end.

I’m just your #1 fan 😉 Well, online fan anyway.

You 100% are!!

When did Leon start calling the governor Walter? I was a bit confused, but I probably just missed the part where you introduced him.

When the governor told him to. XD

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@linus-smallprint    @Liberty    @Hybridlore     @Koshka    @elishavet-pidyon     @Keilah-h

Just a heads up to y’all, if KP is acting up and you don’t get tagged, I normally post a section every morning, (save Sunday) baring assassination, the women’s draft (in which case I will go under ground and change my author’s name), or an opportunity…[Read more]