hybridlore

@elishavet-pidyon That was really good!

@ellette-giselle

The funniest thing is, you are writing a LotR fanfic but in a way that no one would actually say, “Oh, it’s fanfic!” It’s a complete twist of the rules! Quite brilliant really.

Funny enough I always kinda assumed it was a LOTR fanfic that turned into its own thing, because the names o…[Read more]

@esther-c

Do you have any additional feedback after having read the whole thing?

What Sara said about adding in the other siblings a bit more. Most of them I couldn’t name or differentiate. Granted, I can barely keep track of my own siblings. XD

I loved Easton and Autumn! They’re so sweet and loving, and I can totally imagine them as grandparents…[Read more]

And @hybridlore

@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr

Thoughts on Easton and Autumn as a couple and how their personalities go together? I’m doing some character work rn and I’m wondering if those two actually are a good match… like if they would make a good married couple in the future….

@loopylin

I need to think about the fear responses.

How long would your character survive the zombie apocalypse?

I’m tempted to say they’d all be fine since they don’t seem to have much in the way of brains…XD

Ryla would try to feed them baked goods instead of brains and would die.

Ardon would probably die trying to protect Ryla, but if he…[Read more]

@liberty

Well, that was fast!!! I am so glad that you liked it!!! Woah! Favorites list!??! That’s saying something when I know the kind of things you read!!

Well thanks so much for skimming it! I’ll take a look at the comments. May email you a few things after I do! Yes, I have a playlist. I’ll email that too.

@elishavet-pidyon  @koshka

Honestly! You two need this published!

The funniest thing is, you are writing a LotR fanfic but in a way that no one would actually say, “Oh, it’s fanfic!” It’s a complete twist of the rules! Quite brilliant really.

@grcr take as long as you need. Don’t stress yourself out over me, please.

It’s almost done, I promise. I stressed myself out again, but it’s really almost done and I’ll definitely have it shared again soon.

😅😭

@ellette-giselle

I just finished it…I didn’t comment much, but still, there are some. OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!! 314 was my favorite character from the first moment he appeared…but I won’t know 100% for sure until I have the actual book and take the time to fully, slowly read it.

This book reminds me so much of another story a young writer wants…[Read more]

@liberty

also, if you would let me know on KP how far you get each day that would be great so I can look over the comments. Word doesn’t tell me what comments are new and it will save me having to weed through them all. XD

@liberty

Yay! Oooo! So glad you like the boards!

Maybe if I watched the Spiderman movie again, I’d have a different opinion. It’s been a while. That’s what I remember.

@the_lost-journal

I did not notice you asked questions, my apologies!

So how could a death help the plot?

I feel like it really depends on the plot itself. I know that’s a vague answer and isn’t helpful. XD But there are so many different character arcs and plots out there, so I can’t come up with rules for every one of them. Just think of a…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon lol thanks

@liberty Cool!

@ellette-giselle

AHHHH!!! Oh my gosh!!! I love those boards! Amber….that’s SO cool! By the way, I’ve started commenting a bit in Sector 5. I know I’m late, so I’m just skimming it in preporation for Book 2.

@elishavet-pidyon

Interesting… He looks like he’s facing several dilemmas. I like him. Hmm.

😄 You were actually the only person to point that out! Yes…dilemmas is the perfect word.

Was he the prince in the short story?

Yup. 100% royalty.

Closer to the typical knight type of warrior. Honor is a big thing to him.

*big nod* Oh yes. 🎶 Truth, hon…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

That’s a very pretty scene, as well as being sad. I love it.

@elishavet-pidyon

Contemplative personality, probably optimistic in a quieter way.

Ooo, I love how you worded that! “Optimistic in a quieter way”. I’ve found that getting feedback on character boards gives me more varied vocabulary for describing them.

Probably has some good advice up his sleeve and maybe a little mischief(which others don’t e…

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