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@ellette-giselle

So there’s two rebellions? Didn’t realize that.

@ellette-giselle

Well. That was sad.

Poor Amber… and poor Ron. 😢

So was Nathan one of the rebels? And did 210’s explanation mean that the government is on to them? I wasn’t sure if I was reading that right.

@ellette-giselle

Good chapters. Nice touch of action towards the end! And that was a good cliffhanger. 😬

@keilah-h

Huh. I guess that would make sense.

Ellette, if that’s true, maybe make that clearer?

@ellette-giselle ^^

Yes, I think he’s going to do that.

I do like how in this book, we’re getting to see the perspective of one of the soldiers. This is a strong part of the world building, so it’s nice to get a deeper look into it.

Is it just boys who are taken, or are there girls too? Because I feel like you might have mentioned something about there being a girl at the rehab center but I hav…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I commented after I finished the third one. 🙃

@whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint

Alright, we’ll see if he responds!

@ellette-giselle

Wow. This is getting intense.

Good chapters!

@savannah_grace2009 Awesome!

@ellette-giselle @liberty

Jonathamber?

I like Amnathan too.

What makes you say that?? lol

The first book… 😂

@liberty

*cough* Jonathan’s already smitten. 😂

@ellette-giselle

😊

@rae @grcr Praying!!

@ellette-giselle

I feel like Amber and Jonathan are going to adopt Leo. 😂

@ellette-giselle
Uh oh… KP looks weird…

Great chapters!! I can’t wait to see what happens next!

@liberty

Same here…

@ellette-giselle

Aww! Jonathan and Amber and Leo were so cute. 🥰

Poor 618. And 621. That government! 😡

@ellette-giselle

Yay! Jonathan and Michael are back!!

These were great chapters. I can’t wait for 618 (Rory?) to meet the rebellion. (I’m assuming that will happen, anyway.)

@liberty, I think they were your comments? I really hope you’re wrong about Michael dying. 🥺😢

@savannah_grace2009

That’s so exciting!! I know you’ve got some help already, but if you need another set of eyes or another opinion, I’m here! 🤗