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@ellette-giselle

YAYYY!!! This section looks good! I’m interested to see what will happen after they leave the city. Poor Roland. But Julian has a good reaction to him.

So glad you’re back!!

@stephie

Yay!!!!

@stephie

You’re so welcome xD

@highscribeofaetherium Awesome!! 😝

@everybody I’m starting to be a little scared of retaliation… What have I done? XD

@ellette-giselle

Oh, good xD

@liberty

Yay!

@ellette-giselle

Okay, phew. It’s hard to tell when people are actually mad or just teasing on here. 😜

@whalekeeper

I always feel so embarrassed when people ask for my email, because it’s such a bad address name. My dad convinced me to use it when I was twelve, and I haven’t gotten a new address since. 😅

I like it! It’s fitting for a writer. Also, props to you, because I used to be obsessed with making new emails and switching out my address &#x…

@esther-c

I hope you can!! I would love to see you there!

@theducktator

Aw, okay! Hopefully you can still make it!

@ellette-giselle

Fair enough. I wasn’t completely serious—there’s no time limit on the snowballs, so you can do them whenever.

Gotcha. I’ll keep praying that everything gets worked out.

@theducktator Yay!!

@everybody Ellette is going to be our official setter-upper, so if she already has your email, you’re good to go. If not, make sure to tag her in a status update and post it so she can add you. 😊

@esther-c

Hehe. *doesn’t even know how many snowballs I have*

@ellette-giselle

*mischievously grins* You can’t write on your phone? 😋

Well, it’s good you’re going home. Was everything able to get sorted out?

@theducktator @stephie @ellette-giselle @liberty (How is your KP fanfic coming along? Have you worked on it? I eagerly await the next section) @highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper @power @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @raxforge @rae @jonas @loopylin @esther-c @linus-smallprint

10 snowballs at each of you! That’s 500 words, and I expect to be s…[Read more]

@stephie ^^

@grcr @loopylin

Awesome! And no worries, lol. I’m sorry for the early time but with time zones… we’re trying to stick to morning so that the call doesn’t take all Saturday. It could potentially be moved an hour back if enough people want it to.

@mineralizedwritings (Hi! How are you? Haven’t seen you in forever!) @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @whalekeeper @esther-c @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @theshadow @liberty @freed_and_redeemed @kyronthearcanin @trailblazer @acancello @anyone-else-i-forgot

Hear ye, hear ye! God willing, t…[Read more]

@theshadow

just showing more of the city or government, to get a feel of how much the world has changed. Something like that, maybe. Maybe you could have Sara or Cole go to a different area,

Okay! I could always try to integrate that into scenes while they’re traveling (to the church meetings, to their jobs).

Ah, okay. That’s fine if your sti…

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@esther-c

It looks a lot better! One thing I noticed is that Antonio does say “fabuloso” twice.

“Then the topic conveniently comes up in a conversation with Easton.”

Also, I feel like this might be better if you just change it to “Then I can ask Easton” or something like that. Otherwise, it looks great! I like the way you made Hallie more rea…[Read more]

@theshadow

Ooh, I’ve also got to add in the part about the gov trying to pass a new law that allows them to persecute Christians, but I haven’t figured out when yet.

@theshadow

Great! 😁

Okay, I see what you mean. Are you thinking like, within their friend groups? Most of the story so far takes place either at school, the church meetings, or their house. Later, though, there will probably be a lot of scenes at their respective job assignments, so you’ll get to see more of the culture then. Do you have any i…[Read more]