@hybridlore
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Great! Yeah, I thought it was a really cool way to detail the narrative and make Sara’s voice distinct. I’m glad it doesn’t feel too distracting.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
You’re good! XD
Oh, this is unrelated, but by the way, how is Challenge 4 going? What are you planning to do for your senior thesis? (I saw you were sprinting to work on it.)
I think I understand what you were trying to say, and I love that idea! A scene is starting to form in my head already 😅 The only problem is, I’ll have to…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Awesome!! Sorry I stopped tagging you, I didn’t know if you were still reading.
Thank you so much for the feedback! Making the world relatable was one of my big focuses, because I didn’t want it to just be this unrealistic cliche dystopian. I wanted the reader to be able to see why the government was this way, and for the gra…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
I’m sorry, that sounds really hard. You were able to find a doctor that seemed like she knew what she was doing, right? Have they been able to figure out different ways to help you?
Yeah, it can be hard, but most of the time it’s not too bad. Same. Mine’s more guilt/compulsive thoughts. Mainly just enhanced anxiety, but i…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Aw, I’m sorry!! I’ve been praying for you. Is it the health stuff, or just everything?
I’m doing pretty good. I still struggle with my OCD a bit, but for the most part it’s better. I do still have bad days though.
Okay. What time zone are you in? I believe the next one will be at 11 EST, but I guess that still counts…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Yeah! It’s not too late, if you’re not too busy for March!
Ahh, yeah. That would explain it
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@liberty Ellette is in Brookside Stories, I believe.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
XD Yeah, poor Dale. That was a lot of snow in his mouth at the end.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
He already is. 😉
Oh boy . . . XD *whispers*
What did I just get myself into…Soo… is it pronounced to rhyme with bay-lick?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Pronounced the same as Alec?
I was saying it “ay-lec” in my head, but I don’t know if that’s accurate.
Yeah, it gave me very . . . Socratic-discussion vibes. But it was great. That’s funny, I also like to debate… slightly lol. It’s a little stressful.
I don’t know, I just like him. He’s funny and impulsive (li…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
I love it!!! Julian is amazing. The debating scene was a nice change from how they’ve had to speak to others in the past.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Weird. Are you on the home page where it shows you all the topics?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
So, the website isn’t loading for me. But I know they send out a video with help to figure out how to navigate stuff. I know it’s super overwhelming the first day, but you’ll figure it out in no time.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Love it! The ending is intriguing. 😉
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @esther-c @liberty
I guess the Chickadee tent was filled all the way, or they’re not doing it this year? I’m in Sunrise Peak
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Lol.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Poor Highscribe. What did you do to her?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Leon is definitely more confident and the leader. It feels like Julian looks to him and gets more concerned about things. And Julian likes to make quips. That was just what I think I noticed from this chapter.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
He’s my favorite so I want him to die.
No wonder you kill off so many characters. 😅
🖋️Official KP Psychopath✒️
Lolol
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