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@savannah_grace2009

It looks great, Sara! I didn’t read the sixth story, but I enjoyed the other new ones. The order seemed to work pretty well, and I thought it was great that you added an introduction to explain the stories before jumping in. Just one note–the afterword was spelled “afterward” in the doc. Otherwise, I don’t really have any big…[Read more]

@raxforge

Yeah, it hasn’t been working right for a few days now. But without Kathleen around to fix it, I’m not sure if it will get better. 😕

@ellette-giselle

KP is breaking on my phone. I got emailed for that but when I clicked on it, it did not show your post. Now I’m on my laptop, and somehow it shows it now. 🤔

“What? What did I do?” *in very innocent voice.*

Only killed off at least four pretty important characters in only two books. (Prince guy, Turin, Aaron, Adrian.) Nearly kill…[Read more]

@theshadow

It just sounds so much better than “looked”. XD

@shadow @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @theducktator @savannah-grace2009 @sorry-if-i-forgot-anyone-😢

Next two chapters! 😆 I’m fairly pleased with these. Chapter 13 (Alec’s first POV!) may need to be extended a bit, but it certainly ups the stakes a bit. At…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Happy late birthday!!!!!!!! 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉

@ellette-giselle

I’m shaking my head at you right now.

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, sometimes it looks different and the entire website doesn’t load, but it still works usually.

You 100% are!!

Nice. 😎

I feel like I’ve had a tone of those scenes though.

Yeah, good point. Maybe add something in their journal entries about how it went well, and how Leon is proud of Julian? Something like that.

You have no ide…

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@ellette-giselle

I got tagged for both of these, so I’m assuming it’s working again for the most part.

since no one has been replying to this except for Hybridlore,

I’m just your #1 fan 😉 Well, online fan anyway.

Good section. I was right about them meeting the boy again, but wrong about him coming with them. Oh well.

When did Leon start calli…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Probably not, I guess I just missed that.

@ellette-giselle

ack, yes, I missed a word there. When I read it over my brain said it was there. XD

XD Yep, happens to me too.

Okay, so Julian was about 17-19 in Joseph’s book (I never specified) which makes him in his late twenties now. Leon is a few years older so late twenties to very early thirties.
Rolf and Roland are around 19-25
Aelic is 1…

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@ellette-giselle

Sorry, for some reason I didn’t get an email for this. 🙁

Good section! I like Julian’s reaction to Leon being the White Knight, and how they resolve their argument.

Julian raised an eyebrow. “I think that’s about the first time you have ever admitted I was better at you than something.”

Lol.

He knew this room very well. Leon…

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@savannah_grace2009

I read through it and loved it! I think it will really touch the heart of whoever is going to read it. Don’t let the enemy convince you otherwise. If the Holy Spirit is calling you to do this, you can do it. He’ll give you the strength.

My favorites were Story #2, #3, #5, and #6. For order, I would suggest maybe putting the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009
Sara, that sounds like a great idea!! I’ll try to read through it and give some feedback if I have any. You’ve got this!!

@theducktator
Praying!!

@theducktator

Yayy!!!! Praise God!!

@theshadow

Yeah, that sounds about right. (It’s one of my favorite words 🤪). I’ll try to be mindful of it.

@theshadow

Okay, yay! Does Ellette have your email?

@ellette-giselle

I know!! That is such a Julian thing to do, right!

Ugh 😂

@ellette-giselle

Yes. I just hope it doesn’t lead to bad stuff for them.

I think you’re enjoying the suspense way too much. 🤔🙄

@highscribeofaetherium

Aw, sorry to miss you! Hopefully you’ll be able to make the next one! (Let us know if anything changes! 😉)

@whalekeeper

XD No problem! Hope you feel better soon!