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@the_lost-journal

Congratulations!!!

@keilah-h

Ewwww! Babies too? 🤮

@ellette-giselle

Nope. XD

@ellette-giselle

Yes, I did—I think I responded? Unless I didn’t send it?

It’s cool. I had no idea what it meant until I read the rest of it though. XD

@ellette-giselle

That’s so exciting!!!! Congratulations!!!!

@ellette-giselle

Yay!! I was getting a little worried 😅

Have you graduated yet, by the way? (Congrats if you did!)

This section was good. I think you did a good job of showing the horror of the University executions without making it too descriptive *shudders*

Leon ran the other way, and Julian turned and scrambled down the street nearest to…

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@ellette-giselle

No new sections?

@ellette-giselle

What I’m asking is, as readers, did you get anything out of this in this book at this time in this place, or did you just read it more to get over it to the next part of the story?

I agree with Keilah and Linus—I think you should leave it in, but maybe have Julian encourage the believers more by reminding them of their future hope.

@theducktator

Praying!!!

@ellette-giselle

Gotcha. You might want to try to clarify the definition a little more, but I would see what others like Linus think.

What does your signature mean, by the way?

@keilah-h ^^

@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle@keilah-h @theducktator

New chapters! I’m getting a little short on my supply so I’ll probably start posting singles instead of doubles every week soon. The past few weeks have been busy, but hopefully I’ll start writing again soon.

@ellette-giselle

I like how Konner and the others are afraid of the Empire. That seems realistic—I would be surprised if in a time like this, all the Christians were courageous enough to defy the government always. Julian’s speech is good. Very rousing. A few parts didn’t make sense.

“If we make decisions based on survival, and only on the abi…

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@koshka

I’d love to be tagged!!

@ellette-giselle

Good section. I’m glad Leon and Julian saved Hue. It’ll be interesting to see what happens in the Capital.

@ellette-giselle

Ohhhhh! Now I remember him! My bad—I thought Leon had recognized him.

@ellette-giselle

I didn’t get tagged for the last section, so I read them both today. I like it a lot. Linus (?) was right, it was time to go back into the cities. Sad for all those at the University. I like how you showed a threat to the church besides the Soldiers—a threat from the inside. And I’m guessing Andreas is also a former fighter that…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Got it. Tell her happy birthday!

@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator

New chapters!

@ellette-giselle

Yeahh xD If I had stopped to think about it, I probably would have expected something to happen with it.

Oh yeah. Thanks for the reminder. XD