@hybridlore
Active 2 hours, 15 minutes ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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hybridlore replied to the topic CRAZY WRITING WEEK IS BACK!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 hours, 14 minutes ago
Ah, I gotcha.
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hybridlore replied to the topic CRAZY WRITING WEEK IS BACK!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 hours, 19 minutes ago
@grcr Crazy Writing Week, starts on Monday (Jan 6th) and ends the 14th. It’s a motivational writing challenge type of thing to see how many words your team can write in a week. I’ve never done it before, but it sounded like fun! Whaley knows more about it, if you have other questions.
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hybridlore replied to the topic CRAZY WRITING WEEK IS BACK!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 hours, 23 minutes ago
This is The Color of Hope, the one about the girl with synesthesia 😉
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hybridlore replied to the topic CRAZY WRITING WEEK IS BACK!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 hours, 23 minutes ago
@grcr @theducktator Did you guys sign up?
@whalekeeper @anyone-else I’m planning to work on my WIP as much as I can! Unfortunately, I just realized I’m supposed to be starting homework for the first week of CC, and we were assigned to read 100 pages of history over the break . . . which I haven’t started yet because I didn’t know about it until…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 hours, 18 minutes ago
In my defense, it looks more like a snowball on the computer. 😅 But yeah, I was too lazy to scroll through them all and I saw a round, light object… 🤪
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 2 hours ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hi…. (: in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 3 hours ago
@whalekeeper Lol! 😂
@koshka @whaley @godlyfantasy12 I should be on there also as hybridlore, but we shall see on Monday. 🤷♀️
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hi…. (: in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 4 hours ago
Hey, girl! It’s Crazy Writing Week, and you’re just in time! I believe it starts on the sixth. 😊
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 1 hour ago
Oh, ok, lol! 😅
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 3 hours ago
Well. I just scrolled through like, ten pages of this to count my snowballs. I think there was eight. I will be writing them up and posting them later.
Sorry I haven’t responded to your KP fanfic sections. It’s about to get interesting, tag me when you finish the next one!
@theducktator Your signature isn’t from Of Fire and Ash, is it?…[Read more]
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hybridlore posted a new activity comment 2 days, 5 hours ago
Cool!! A peppermint cake sounds interesting . . . Funny, ’cause I’ve always loved apple pie and so one year I had that for my birthday (September is still too early for it to be everywhere, though.) What do you usually pair it with–chocolate?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 6 hours ago
Oh no!!! That’s terrible!!! That makes me want to cry for you!
I know. I was so mad.
Hmm, I find it funny that you think the ending thing feels a little un-realistic. I wrote it after reading of five different situations in different countries where something like this happened to Believers who had been arrested. XD
I guess the B…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 6 hours ago
THEOLOGY/MESSAGE
~ Any theological concerns for the story?
I don’t think so.
~ What would you say my world view was?
Christian? XD. (Again, I don’t really know what kind of answer you want here.)
~ What would you say was the message of the story?
God will give us strength when we are weak and help us have the courage to stand up for Him.
~Were…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 6 hours ago
STORYLINE
~ Was the plot solid and engaging?
~ Did the pacing feel consistent throughout the book? If not, where did it lag or feel dull?
I feel like these two kind of go together. The pacing, I felt, was not very consistent. Sometimes we would be skipping over weeks or months, sometimes we would get slow, slice-of-life scenes, and sometimes we…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 6 hours ago
I’m flexible, so whenever everyone else is ready to read the next book is fine with me. And is it about Leon and Julian?
K, here’s the characters section.
CHARACTERS~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
Joseph, because he’s the main. 🤪 But no, really, we got to see all his inner…[Read more]
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hybridlore posted a new activity comment 3 days, 6 hours ago
No way! That’s really cool. Is it fun having your birthday right after Christmas, or do you wish it was spaced out more?
Cool! (Lol, I forgot how old I was for a second.) I turned 16 in September!
Lol, yeah, that sounds typical
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 6 hours ago
I WAS LITERALLY ON THE ILLUSTRATION QUESTION 😣
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 6 hours ago
I was so, so close to finishing your questions, and then a bee came over by me, and I picked up my laptop and ran away (lol.)
But then I accidentally hit the screen somehow and I CLOSED THE LINK!!!
Augggghhhh. I cannot believe that just happened. Now I have to write them all out AGAIN. So this might take a while.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 7 hours ago
AHHH ELLETTE YOU SAVED THEM!!!
AND IT’S DONE!! CONGRATULATIONS!! (I know this is a later draft, but still xD)
Biggest thing I noticed, is that, in the end where Joseph and Amelia are talking, some of the things that they say, “I’m so glad that… etc.” seemed a little bit like info-dumping. It’s good for us to have all that in…[Read more]
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hybridlore posted a new activity comment 3 days, 8 hours ago
Oh, cool! Is your birthday right around Christmas, or has it been a while?
Nice!! Yeah, I feel like that’s one of the more popular ones. I believe when I had my parents take it they both got that one (but I might be remembering wrong.) also, the author is a shadower too.
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