@hybridlore
Active 1 hour, 18 minutes ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 hour, 17 minutes ago
@ellette-giselle Oh right. 🤦♀️ Sorry. I hope you have fun. Are you still away for Thanksgiving?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 hour, 20 minutes ago
@ellette-giselle Girl. 😳🫠
When are you going to post the next section?
(I’ll get to the snowball later this afternoon.)
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 19 hours, 24 minutes ago
Lolol.
You don’t have to post your words, but you’re welcome to if you want. 😉
@ellette-giselle 💨⚪ @esther-c 💨⚪
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hybridlore started the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 21 hours ago
This is a new, fun, wintery way to get words in,
that we totally did not steal from KDWC.@esther-c 🤭Here are the rules!
For each snowball you get hit with, write 50 words.
Then, throw two snowballs at other KPers.
If you want to throw more than one snowball at one person, tag them once, but put a x2 (or whatever number) by that tag. Then t…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hi…. (: in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 21 hours ago
@godlyfantasy12 @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 (I know, I already talked to you xD)
YOU’RE BACK!!!! 🎉🤗
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 days, 19 hours ago
Praying. 🙏
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 days, 19 hours ago
@the-ducktator That’s okay! I’m glad it wasn’t terrible. Sorry you got a cold, though.
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hybridlore posted an update 3 days, 1 hour ago
“ A warm ember of hope sparked in her chest, and Sara saw a translucent, pink flicker of a flame.” 👀
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hybridlore replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 1 hour ago
Yay, another section! 😆 It looks good! I don’t have too much to say about, but I thought Jonas’s critiques were good.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 1 hour ago
Yay, Leon and Julian are back! 😁 Great section. It did kind of gloss everything and not show it personally, but that’s okay as long as your go back to more immediate-feeling scenes, if that makes sense. Joseph’s character is good. I’m glad he feels afraid and guilty for his fear. He feels human.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days ago
You can borrow them back to post as long as you don’t kill them.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days ago
HEY. There’s not enough room, okay? I like that quote.
Is that really a thing? Anyway, it’s too late. They’re mine now.
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hybridlore posted a new activity comment 5 days ago
No, I didn’t* lol.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days ago
Nope. Not happening. *puts all of your characters on the protection squad*
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hybridlore posted an update 5 days ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days ago
Yeah, the special attention, and her age. 🤪
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days ago
Ohhhh, gotcha.
I don’t know. The way you described her. I think I’m just used to picking out love interests immediately.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days ago
Lolol. How did Linus know about Amelia already? And you weren’t very subtle. XD
True, but they would have gotten married.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 1 hour ago
I feel like Joseph and Amelia are going to get married . . . 🤭
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 2 hours ago
That’s true, the rewrite was.
The one paragraph where you said something along the lines of, make the enemy rejoice when you’re out of the fight, seemed taken straight from that quote (C.S. Lewis?) I could see modern believers saying something like that, but I don’t think it would be a well-known phrase in this world. Maybe p…[Read more]
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ooh yes I remember this conversation. Very cool!
The idea of pink translucent flames reminds me of that little salamander and his magic flames in Frozen 2.