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@emilysf

By the way, I just realized what your profile picture says. XD

That could make sense. I would have this as hammered down as possible before the death scene of course. 😉

If you do ever read the Wingfeather Saga, some of this may clear up. But if you do, enjoy the series, don’t just read it for writing purposes. =) (I will especially…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

By the way, whoever I mention first is the actual point of view for a section.

Vulkasin and Zlatan.

Door after door brought nothing in reward, and by the second corridor Vulkasin was sure they were headed higher into the castle, not down to some courtyard.

He was about to suggest they turn around when Ara’s…[Read more]

It is interesting though, Zlatan’s story is set up a little different as although there is a ‘villian’ who initiates most of his problems, Zlatan is his own antagonist.

His name btw, means ‘Golden one’.

@godlyfantasy12

Aw, poor girl. That does sound like a good plot point.

Do I do that? Nah, only have major ‘what is truth?’ and ‘what have I done?’ issues planned for my MCs, so nothing overly tramatic. XD

@godlyfantasy12

I noticed those color combinations had some sort of effect on her. The puzzle pieces are clicking.

@godlyfantasy12

And cheers for skirt-girls!(being one myself) I’m relishing that.

@godlyfantasy12

She’s great!

Oohh, so that’s why Ara was so flumuxed by Zlatan’s black hair. Hmmm, many those two should meet. Zlatan with charcoal black hair, golden eyes, and a mildly-pessimistic-yet-somehow-idealistic nature, and your dear antagonist Corvina whith her whole set of problems. Especially if Elishavet’s villian gets in too.

This…[Read more]

@denali-christianson

Welcome elf! *deep curtsey* I am Koshka, a cat, though I believe we may have already met.

However you have not met she-who-I-am-also, Limmeth, a five foot wood elf.

*Steps out from behind tree*

*Glances about gripping longbow*

*Pulls hood low and darts up tree*

I write historical fantasy and poetry with the occasional…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I have a villian, a horrible villian who was literally inspired from a history book, but he may not be a good, ah, antagonist for this castle, as I know practically nothing of his character besides the stone and ice shell he has apparently become. No, he can never be redeemed. In fact I believe he is executed in the end for war…[Read more]

Ok course, at this point I have no idea what to write…so you have any?

@godlyfantasy12

I have time!

@denali-christianson @godlyfantasy12

Definitely. I’m still waiting to see how the courtyard sense continues.

Zlatan and Vulkasin

Zlatan’s left shoulder ached. He sighed and shifted the weight of his shield. I don’t know what to do.

He could hear his brother’s even steps behind him, and then a moment later at his side. He glanced up at his twin. Vulkasin’s yellow-green eyes were flashing bright with excitement. How can he like this sort of th…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Yay! Its Nyx and Lyn! I was hoping. =)

@godlyfantasy12

Vulkasin and Zlatan

Ara was hiding a smile. Vulkasin supposed Zlatan could have chosen a better name, but then, there were worse.

“I’m afraid not…Though, I’m guessing from the way you describe him, you aren’t on good terms?” She glanced at Novembré who seemed a bit red about the ears. Vulkasin grinned, then wiped it off under hi…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Go ahead! You could have her interact with Sofia, if you wanted.

@emilysf

Hmmm, if you could write this well it could be powerful, but…hmm. My brain may have exploded over this one. Here are a few questions:

Is your MC dying just because he won’t defend himself/kill someone, or because he sees that Anti isn’t ready to die/has something he needs to do. Obviously someone willing to murder isn’t ready to die,…[Read more]

Worldbuilding is fun, difficult and frustrating sometimes yes, but we didn’t actually think this would be easy, did we?

*Sigh of dismay*

I do enjoy it though, especially being able to create my own solar/calender system, because why be boring? Hint; if you’re wanting to show a huge rift between two cultures using separate calenders helps. In…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Zlatan and Vulkasin

Vulkasin wasn’t alone. Zlatan’s golden eyes narrowed as he studied the girl a moment. Brown hair and eyes, worried face. She stared at him as if he would eat her.

Novembré stepped out behind him. “So, you’ll help me then?”

The girls face flashed with light at her sudden smile. “November!”

The lad’s face…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

And November and Ara are awesome! I keep laughing with every new VP of his.