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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Block. in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
@kate-flournoy – Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
This is one other story idea I have that I haven’t been able to get to work. (have you heard of the nursery rhyme ‘Little Jack Horner?’)
Little Jack Horner was a real boy and lived in the Abbey of Glastonbury during the reign of Henry VIII. The abbot sent the deed of the abbey to the king concealed…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Block. in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
@daeus – Grrrrr. My mind must be very lazy. I never think of anything worth writing. I have found a book called ‘A Step in the Write Direction, 999+ ideas for creative writing.’ by Sandra Lynn. It is quite helpful, but right know I really don’t know what to write about. Arrrrggghhhh!!! Any suggestions are welcome… 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Block. in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
Oooo! You are so luckly. I hit writer’s block all the time. Sometimes I hear something and I think “that’s such a great story idea” and start writing and then get stuck. 😛 I hate it when I do that. Do you have any suggests on how to come up with idea for stories too? That is one of the things I struggle with the most. I like your suggestion. I…[Read more]
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BlueJay started the topic Writer's Block. in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
What do you do when you hit writer’s block?
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BlueJay replied to the topic Anna's Savanna by BlueJay in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 4 months ago
I love that part too. I think my favourite line bit though is:
Another two, rifles at the ready, watched the water for crocodiles. I wondered if that would make my mum feel better or worse. -
Ivy Rose started the topic When Do You Write? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
During NaNoWriMo this year, I tried a few different times of the day to write. I tried from 6am to 9am, but having no morning-person-ness in me whatsoever, that didn’t go well after a week or so. So then, I tried writing from 3pm to 5pm. That worked pretty good, but I was continually being called away to do something around the house. After that,…[Read more]
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Ivy Rose replied to the topic I need help with a line in my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 4 months ago
Aww. 🙁 Well, I’m probably not much of an actress (though I’ve never tried acting before), so I’d better just stay here in the freezing cold, looking out at the pretty snow, (I don’t know how to post photos on here) and reading a good book. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic I need help with a line in my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 4 months ago
Yeah! Not sure what my family would say but why not? 😉 Oh wait, I have a theatrical production coming up next week and as I’m the lead role, I’d better stay put. *Sad sigh* (Can you post photos on the forum, if yes, you should post some of lovely white fluffy snow.) 😀
I do hope, though, to travel to America one day. My brother went to Texas and…[Read more] -
Ivy Rose replied to the topic I need help with a line in my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 4 months ago
@bluejay YES!!! We have snow. A lot of snow. Of course you can visit me…why don’t we just trade places for awhile? You get snow and I get warm weather. Deal? 😉
Hey, I do that to my ‘in’s’ all the time! My fingers can’t keep up with my brain! 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Anna's Savanna by BlueJay in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 4 months ago
Good point!
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BlueJay replied to the topic I need help with a line in my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 4 months ago
Oops. That n should have been ‘in’. Grrrrrrr
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BlueJay replied to the topic I need help with a line in my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 4 months ago
@ivyrose – You have snow!?! You are so lucky. We didn’t get any snow last year and I looooooove playing n snow. Can I come an visit you??? 😛
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Ivy Rose replied to the topic I need help with a line in my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 4 months ago
@writefury Isn’t it amazing the temp difference in one state? We have some friends that live near Seattle and they tell us that it is quite pleasant there…40 degrees or so. It didn’t get any warmer than 10 degrees here today, but the sun was shining very bright and making the snow look like glitter. It was beautiful, despite the bitter cold that…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Anna's Savanna by BlueJay in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 4 months ago
@kate-flournoy – How could I forget a description of Savanna? Especially her eyes!!! I’ll add that to the story for sure.
I’ll have a look and see if there is another way to say that line.
With the debit card it’s a bit of a joke in our family. When you get charged you have to pay. So when a rhino charges you (money) you pay him. Does that make a…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic I need help with a line in my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 4 months ago
@kate-flournoy – your link worked and the story is posted for all who wish to read it. Please feel free to critique it too. (I looooove criticism) 😛
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BlueJay started the topic Anna's Savanna by BlueJay in the forum 10 years, 4 months ago
Anna’s Savanna
Have you ever wanted to say that you have owned the weirdest pet in the world? A pet that no one else has owned before? A pet that makes people envy you? I have. I am a typical teenager living in a typical flat in a typical city. Boring. My name is Anna. Boring. I have straight brown hair. Boring. And nothing exciting ever…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic I need help with a line in my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 4 months ago
@Ivy-Rose – It would be that in America. So when it is 30 degrees in Australia is would be like 86 in America. So because it is 5 degrees where you are is would be -15 for me. (Boy, I’m glad I’m in Aus) And yes, yes yes…why don’t you come to Australia? 😛 Just fly over and have the best holiday of your life, sweating out here, swatting flies,…[Read more]
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Ivy Rose replied to the topic I need help with a line in my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 4 months ago
Hi Tessa! Nice to meet you! Your story sounds very interesting. I am a sucker for anything that has to do with rescuing animals. 🙂
Oh my…it’s 86 degrees in Australia? Can I please come visit? 🙂 I am freezing my toes off here in Eastern Washington (State). It’s a balmy 5 degrees outside right now. BRRRRRR!!!
Glad to have you here on the forum!
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BlueJay replied to the topic Realistic Reactions in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
RA is by John Flanagan. And with a bit of fixing, they are an awesome series. If you haven’t read them you should!!!
It sounds like a book that I would cry at. (Everything makes me cry. I feel for all the heroes and when they cry so do I) Whenever we watch a movie that we know is going to be sad, my siblings say “Let’s get out the bathers and…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Realistic Reactions in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
Haha. Never read it. In fact hadn’t heard of it till now. 😛
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