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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video Six: Positive Character Arc in the forum Discussion Questions 7 years, 3 months ago
@perfectfifths Ah; I see. Yeah, I would probably fit it into the positive arc then. Here’s a question to consider that you may find helpful: if you were going to go through and revise Sutcliffe’s book, how would you change the story/the protagonist’s character arc to make the story more enjoyable to you? I find that when I do this with books I…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Hello Fellow Pen Wielders! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 3 months ago
@Emerald-Flyer Welcome to the site! You’ll find a lot of fellow fantasy writers here. 🙂 who are your favorite authors?
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Hello! I'm Aislinn in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 3 months ago
Welcome to the site @aislinn-mollisong! You came in at the perfect time since we’ll be publishing a lot of fantasy articles next month. 🙂 Who are your favorite fantasy authors?
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video Six: Positive Character Arc in the forum Discussion Questions 7 years, 3 months ago
@perfectfifths Oh–I may have read that book myself a long time ago! I forget, but I know I’ve read a fair number of Sutcliffe’s works. Whether or not its a complex arc depends on how long it takes. If the initial negative arc is just a couple initial chapters or a prologue or something, I would probably say it doesn’t count since that’s just part…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Videos 6-8: Developing Character Arcs in the forum Writing Assignments 7 years, 3 months ago
@perfectfifths So just to clarify, currently the midpoint represents a backsliding for Amrei? Backsliding can be a very effective tactic to take; however, generally that kind of moment like you’re describing happens better at the third plot point (I get into that in lesson nine on weaving theme into your story structure). I’d recommend choosing a…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Greetings, earthlings! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 3 months ago
Welcome to the site @jessi-rae! Glad you found us. 🙂 What’s the premise of the dystopian novel you’re writing?
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Classic book Suggestions in the forum Book Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
Divine Comedy is in a tier unto itself in my book, but be aware that it takes a couple readings to fully get the book. I recommend Anthony Esolen’s translation of the work. After that, my Romantic/Realist triad of novels I like to recommend are Crime & Punishment, Pride & Prejudice, and Frankenstein.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Heehee, new here 😛 in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 3 months ago
Welcome to the site @CK4always! Glad you found us. 🙂 What areas are you looking to grow the most in writing?
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Hey all in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 3 months ago
@majerot Wow–that’s an impressive collection of work there! Also, that list of favorite authors is awesome. I can see many of my own favorites also there–particularly Dostoevsky. ^_^ My favorite of his is probably Brothers Karamazov; how about yourself?
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Bonjour, Fellow Authors! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 3 months ago
@warrenluther04 I will keep that in mind! And I’m very glad to hear that. KP has been a great encouragement to me for many years and I’m incredibly grateful to be able to serve the community in this role.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discouragment in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
Hey @salome01w4g! Couple recommendations! First, like @that_writer_girl_99 said, I’d recommend creating a file for all your characters where you record information like that. That makes it really easy to check and make sure you’re not contradicting yourself. 🙂
Second, on the whole deleting words issue, while I know that not getting to a certain…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Hey all in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 3 months ago
Hey @majerot; welcome to the site! What kind of poetry do you write? Form or free-verse?
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Way too many cliches in one place in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
@daeus Holy cow; these are awesome. 😀
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Hi guys! It's me! I've come to join the bestiest place on the internet. in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 3 months ago
@JosiahDeBoer Weeks writes fantasy; Swavely writes sci-fi set in a slightly-futuristic earth (I’m sure there’s a sub-genre title for that side of sci-fi, but I don’t read sci-fi enough to know :P). Swavely’s one of my favorite Christian spec fic writers. Fair word of warning though: both authors have some sexual content in their books (especially…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Bonjour, Fellow Authors! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 3 months ago
@warrenluther04 Haven’t seen the old Adam West stuff, but I definitely agree that Homecoming is fantastic! Vulture is probably my favorite villain in the MCU right now.
Kingdom Pen was founded in 2011, but I actually didn’t join on until 2013 and didn’t start running the site until last year. The current website was put together in 2013/2014 and…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Hi guys! It's me! I've come to join the bestiest place on the internet. in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 3 months ago
@josiahdeboer Ha–you must be! xD Brandon Sanderson, Orson Scott Card (he probably takes the cake as favorite author for me, but Sanderson’s a close second), Brent Weeks, Stephen Lawhead, N.D. Wilson, and Dave Swavely.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 3 months ago
@salome01w4g No problem! I wrote an article on the subject a while back if you want to check it out: https://kingdompen.org/foil-characters-what-they-are-and-how-to-use-them/ Basically it’s when you create a combination of similarities and differences between two characters (or two situations) in order to draw attention to them as a pair so the…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Howdy Y'all! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 3 months ago
Thanks @shannon Yeah; it’s hard for me to know which was harder–leaving my church or leaving all the college friends I’d been with for four years. God has consistently brought me to great new church families, though, so I trust I’ll be able to find one in North Carolina.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 3 months ago
@Salome01W4G Nice! Sounds like a solid premise with a lot of potential for foil characters & situations (which happen to pretty much be my favorite thing if you haven’t seen me writing about them yet. 😉 )
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Greetings and Salutations Fellow Wordsmiths in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 3 months ago
@koryn-koch Yes! That line and the “I’m erasing myself from the narrative” line… Both are so good!
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