Haley Ramm

@the_lost-journal

Lololol. Thanks. 😂

I might have to take a look.

@keilah-h

Thanks. I might!

@hybridlore

I know!!!!!! I’m a terrible author!!! 😱😭

Wait a sec…… isn’t it my goal to make the reader miserable? 😈🤣

I promise to send the next section today. Right now. I’m running final edits this very moment.

@linus-smallprint

Also, this is ‘As you know’ dialogue. Leon is telling Julian something he already knows in order to inform the reader.

is that actually bad though? I haven’t done it often, and I don’t see much of another way to get that info across. Plus, I’ve used “as you know” sentences before in conversation just to help listeners mak…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I was trying, but I think I’m out of time today. I almost had it done too. 😥

@keilah-h

dang that’s dark

yeah, well that’s reality for ya.

It seems like they suddenly have a lot more control over the Empire than they appear to.

Uh yeah. They’ve got a pretty strong hold now. Not only are they controlling the Empire’s ruler by fear of the gods, but they’ve got him personally motivated to avenge his cousin and set his kingd…[Read more]

@keilah-h

perhaps…

more like a knitted hat.

if you look closely at what the prince said, it leads to the suggestion that he was killed by the priests because he got upset at them for killing his son.

what do you think of Leon’s backstory?

@hybridlore

Julian and Leon are now in the bottom of the arena.

That doesn’t mean they’ll fight.

@hybridlore

Good section. The new prince’s beliefs make more sense now.

Yeah, he’s a character you almost feel bad for.

 

And we got to find out Leon’s backstory!!

I thought you’d like that.

Does him getting angry when Julian was all excited about him being the White Knight in the last book make sense now?

Did any of it surprise you…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

Ugh! I posted two hours ago, but KP ate it!

NEXT SECTION!

Extra long to make up for yesterday.

 It was several hours later that the sound of steps echoed in the hall outside. Julian and Leon stood as the door opened.

The guar…

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@theducktator

young-earth creationist.

@theducktator

Ah, this question.

I believe in a young earth, both scientifically and personally.

What is amazing to me is looking back at what we can figure out of how the Earth formed, and how that aligns with Scripture if you let Earth be young (Genesis 1 is shockingly scientific, so to speak).

(Plus, the Geologic record…there are some…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

no section today.

Super busy.

Sorry!

@hybridlore

maybe.

super busy.

trying to.

*mouth open in shock*

GIRL!!!!!

NO WAY!!!

That is AMAZING!!!!!!

I love it so much!!!!

@whalekeeper

Noooooo. Don’t give up! I want to see it!

@rae

Ahhh! It’s tomorrow!! Where is it?!?!

@keilah-h

That was so cute!!!

That’s super cool that you can do that!

@hybridlore

Are you threatening me?

Remember what happened last time?

Okay, I can smooth out the shifts,

Ah, thanks for the grammar catch.

I like how the soldier tries to get Julian and Leon to admit they’re traitors, and finally he’s just like, well, you’re the guys who defected, so there.

Lololol. He’s just not having it.…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Yeah…..

Ah thanks.

Hmm, interesting. I guess we’ll have to see.

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

NEXT SECTION!!!

Leon blew on his hands and rubbed them together. He stood up and went to his pack. Digging through it, he found his scarf. It was worn, and there were a few tears along the edge. He held it in both hands and though…

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@linus-smallprint

Haha!!!!

LOVE IT!

🤣

@keilah-h

large fines could leave a family destitute and starving. Public retribution could be anything, including baring them from work or places of business or physical punishment.