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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character commissions!! in the forum Art 6 days, 11 hours ago
would you be willing to draw a character of mine? It would really cheer me up to see one of my boys and your art is so fun. If you don’t want to that’s okay tho.
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Esther started the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 13 hours ago
Hey everyone!! So my lovely beta-reader (@hybridlore ) was so awesome in giving me feedback on the first draft of an older WIP (this was the one I had asked for help with a little while back). I’m planning to start digging into the editing phase this week and hopefully have the second draft finished sometime in March (we’ll see… sometimes life…[Read more]
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whaley started the topic Topic of the Week…? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 14 hours ago
So, Topic of the Week! Do we want to start it up again somehow? Please discuss here – if you want it to come back, or if you have any strong opinions about how it should be revitalized.
I’m hesitant to take Kathleen’s job. However, I have plenty of ideas of my own, and would be delighted to do it myself. If this becomes the game plan, I am eager…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
That’s excessive.
These things just happen. Where else am I supposed to put my magic systems? In space?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
(I think at this point I only have, like, two that I care much about?).
Me, with 12: 😐
What’s the second? Ciale?
The floating islands idea (which was the whole main ‘thing’ for Thaliu) I’m not as interested in anymore, so I’m not sure where I’ll go with that (I still like Thaliu, just not sure if I want to rework th…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
What’s Thaliu even like these days? (And, no, it doesn’t matter if this thread gets hijacked. I think we’re done here, for now at least.)
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
lol. I guess that’s what happens when we both read the same book…
Which world was it?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
@highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @theducktator @loopylin @grcr
Thanks for the feedback! So far, it looks like the popularity ranking is:
- Chromancy
- Spectrachromy
- Prismathurgy
- Spectrathurgy
- Spectralurgy
With the other three having no votes. I’ll take this into consideration.
As some have guessed, this is a color-based magic system.…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Help me pick a colorful name for this magic system in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
Okay, so I think the way I want to do this is, I’ll give you a list of some of the options I’ve come up with, without comment, and you tell me what you like. I’m also not going to tell you what this magic system is about (though you can probably guess some of it from the names.) After I get some feedback, I’ll give you more context. Right now, I…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
I can’t argue 🤣
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Kefa replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
oh, uh thanks! Also it is meant to be funny 😅 but it makes sense, Carrot Cake is a deranged psychopathic, pyromaniac, being!
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Kefa replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Here is the thing, TKOK is on an island, separated from the world, they still have magic, creatures, and races that have been long wiped out on the rest of the earth. They do have some enemies, because they do not take up the whole island. Any way, it is illegal to have any aircraft, boats, or people near those islands,…[Read more]
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Kefa started the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Welcome one and all! This is where I shall share about ALL of my work in progresses! I have quit a few!
Anyway, here my WIPs I have:
The Kingdom of Kaimor (fantasy/sword and sorcery)
A Cellar’s tales, WIP name (group of horror stories, that are connected)
That other WIP, still doesn’t have a name 😅 The one about the immortal girl. (Historical…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic Character Name Help in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 3 days ago
I like it
GOOD ENOUGH FOR ME! And yes, it is Uh-hah-va
is there a certain style/ethnicity of names you’re going for? Do you want them to be real names or fantasy names?
Kind of a mix! Sort of where the characters names seem more magical and made up, but are real names! Like here are some I like: Ruth, Rosemary, Emmanuel, S…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Heeyy Sara, I’m about a third through your story right now! What kind of critique do you want? Any specific concerns, stuff like that?
Ummmm
Let me think lol
I think I’m just worried about pacing, flow of the story, and if it’s at all interesting lol
And character development ideas would be helpful too!!
I also just want to know t…[Read more]
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freedom started the topic ⚔️Fantasy WIP⚔️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@rae @savannah_grace2009 @godlyfantasy12 @kyronthearcanin @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theloonyone @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @queen_of_alvastia @gwyndalf-the-wise @thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle22 @esther-c @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @theducktator @smiley @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @trailblazer @acancello @godlyfantasy12…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 4 days ago
I don’t know.
That’s when he just walks out of the room from asking Mr. Benet for Elizabeth’s hand…… That might have something to do with it. lololol.
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Esther posted an update 3 weeks ago
Ok, I’m tagging a lot of people for this, but don’t feel obligated to reply.
So, I’ve gotten stuck in my current WIP, but as I work through that slowly, I want to return to an older WIP that I worked on over the summer and really want to refine. It’s only in a first draft, but I’d like to have a critique partner for it.
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Kefa replied to the topic WIP Suggestion in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 weeks ago
Oh, then yes, and no.
Yeah, I am still considering which time periods I should choose from! And fort the very important question, I have already started working on her origin! I was thinking maybe that she had a test or a choice that was like a choice from God, and she was given the curse of immortality or something like that!…[Read more]
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Actually, I’mma remake the moodboards, hehehe. So they shall be revealed later this week. :PP
@esther-c
I replied but didn’t tag you. Not sure if you got it.
I would be willing to try and help with this. You know my views on Romance are rather different than norm, and I believe highschool romantic relationships aren’t healthy. But I’m willing to give it a shot.
I also do edit. I’m not a line-by-line editor, but I have worked as a plot/character/story editor before.
We do have different beliefs on…[Read more]
I appreciate the offer!! Truly!
But like you said, we might not work super well together because of our different viewpoints. So yeah, right now I’d say no, but I will keep you in mind! :))
No problem! I can be your last resort if no one else offers. 😉
Sounds good. 😉 Let me know if you want to be tagged when I post the chapters on here some time! :))
Mm. Sounds interesting, but I’m totally unqualified. I don’t think I’d be able to help much… Sorry… 😅😑
Hey no worries! 🤗
I’m sorry, I don’t think I can help you 🙁
That’s totally fine, girl! ☺️
I’m definitely interested in reading your novel, but I’ve read almost no YA, so I wouldn’t be much help.
No worries! I’ll be sure to tag you tho when I start sharing it on here!!
Awesome! 🙂
@esther-c I would love to help! This went into my spam for some reason, so I’m sorry I didn’t get back to you. Are you still looking for someone?
Actually…I think you might be perfect. You gave some great feedback on my short story, so I’m sure you could do the same for my novel! :))
I’ll PM you later this week with more details and the link to the doc. Thank you so much!!! 🤗
Awesome! I love family and sibling dynamics, and I also read a good amount of YA, so this seems right up my alley! (Although I won’t be able to help much with the 90s references, haha.)
Do you still have my email from the short story critique?
Yay yay!! (Oh I know, right?? I’ve asked my parents and some other older writers I’ve met through KDWC, and even though they gave me a lot to use [plus Google, lol], there’s still something difficult about getting it right since I didn’t live then 🤪)
Yes I believe so!
@esther-c Yeah, that totally makes sense! I was gonna say, ask your parents xD. But I’m sure it’s still difficult.
Great!! 😄
I may have to get some YA recs from you sometime, because I struggle to find clean fiction that I would actually enjoy 😭
Oh definitely! I’m sure I can come up with a list. Middle grade stuff can be great if it’s well done, because content is so much better. 😉
@hybridlore
Please tag me if you post recommendations! I want to read YA, but it’s usually filthy and cringe.
For sure!! Until you come across that one middle school relationship that somehow works out perfectly. 😂
Ok for some reason even though I still see your comments on the short story doc, it won’t let me view your email. 😅 Could you share that again with me so I can share the other doc?? I’ll tell you as soon as I see it if you don’t want to leave your email up.
Awesome! Tysm!! I’ll probably send you the doc tomorrow since I need to make a few notes on it first. :))
Ok I added you to the document! You should get an email about it I believe. (:
Hoo boy. I’d love to, but uhhhh…I wouldn’t be any help. I’m a terrible critiquer and my romance experience is practically nil. You would probably help me more than I help you….sorry!
Funny enough though, my own romance work (a fanfic) took place in 1970 in New Mexico. What are the odds?
Ahh, no problem! :))
No way! That’s so cool! XD
Yeah it was just a consequence of how the original story was set up, but it’s funny to think about.
I doubt your characters will experience anything even close to mine though lol
Oh dear, was it a Star Wars fanfic?? In that case, I hope my charries aren’t handling the types of weapons they use. 🤣
No, it was something else, but yeah there were a lot of weapons involved XD
My Star Wars fanfics don’t really cross over into our world. Yet.
Though I suppose in a fanfic, you could do whatever 🤷🏻♀️
Oh duhhhh 🤦🏻♀️ I’ve watched like all the Star Wars movies, I should know they don’t take place on earth 🤣
lolllll no biggie.