HighScribe

@grcr

I understand taking a break, I had to do the same thing with my novel!

You take as long as you need, girly <3

I’d love the link if you’re okay with sharing it!!!!!!

Just know that even though sometimes it feels really overwhelming and like some days you can’t bring yourself to write a single word, you’re still a very talented and capable…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

One more thing I should mention. Another reason I saw this is because I took a break between when Amelia first starts feeling unwell and when she screams she has the plague

Okay then, I’ll just leave it.

Joseph getting discouraged because he is comparing himself to others is something that is quite relatable to me, so I think…

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@the_lost-journal @theshadow

I vote A, L, and X.

@ellette-giselle

hmm. Okay, do you think I should take out that part in the letter? Or should I just leave it and let the reader be happy that they guessed a plot twist or else shocked that they didn’t see it.

One more thing I should mention. Another reason I saw this is because I took a break between when Amelia first starts feeling unwell and w…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Thank you very much for your feedback. It was helpful. I think I now have a clearer picture of what I need to work on.

@whalekeeper

Love Tyn. …like Eric, too.

Glad to hear it. These two were the least liked by my readers in the first draft. Tyn is pretty much the same. I think she is just a love-or-hate character. Eric was a disaster, and I almost removed him from the story altogether before I decided to change his role and personality because I realized he…[Read more]

@liberty

But I can’t continue until I figure out exactly what fictional ingredients two of my characters like on their sandwiches.😫

@linus-smallprint

Oh I thought it was fine. It seems like a foretelling that she’s going to become a key character later on. As long as that’s true, I say keep it.

You’re welcome for the feedback!

@ellette-giselle

Don’t have to much to ask you, but:

Martha. Especially some Alan/Martha moments. *blink blink blink. Blinkity-blink blink* lol.

I would still like to know what your thoughts were on switching to Martha in that second-last chapter.

Just that this was a great book and one that I would totally buy. Well done! Keep me in the loop if…

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@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle

I do have some questions/comments to your overall feedback. I will start with Ellette since she posted first.

@whalekeeper

Sorry, I didn’t realize you had replied to this before I logged off yesterday. Thank you for your thoughts as well. I was talking to my dad about the issue and he had similar thoughts.

@stephie

On the other hand, it’s magic. It’s directly contradictory to everything Christians stand for. The Fall of man happened because humans didn’…

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@whalekeeper

HA! I got a majority of those!!

@koshka

Ha!!! That is so good! That is just perfect! Yup, that’s how his brain works. Barnes is a little to close to the life Rory knows. He doesn’t know what to do with Leo, so he’s wound up trusting him.

@loopylin

Woah, you used my real name. XD I guess this must be serious. (You’re okay, you can call me Hannah whenever you want to.)

@loopylin

If you need a bit of time away from people during the holidays, it’s okay to pull out your art for a while. Don’t feel guilty about it, everyone needs to recharge once in a while. Now go eat <3

@loopylin

GO GET FOOD FROM YOUR FRIdGE. NOW.

@loopylin

Do the holidays make you a little sad? …I’ve heard that’s pretty common.

@koshka

You NEED to make PIZzA. Little mini pizza. Tasty. Nom nom. (This is imperative,)

@loopylin

*Passes you a veggie ramen bowl* Good, good. U?

@rae @loopylin

Lore songs because I have them, and I like how vague they are because no one can accuse me of anything.

For Marcel – Death With Dignity by Sufjan Stevens

And Marcel’s nameless ‘friend’ – A Different Kind of Human by Aurora

@koshka

Luckily it was mostly sweat. It’s more icky than anything else.

I would like to learn sabre fencing, but uh… that’s not an easy thing to just find around where I live.

Fencing is just so gosh darn cool… I get it. I wish you good luck, and maybe you’ll randomly stumble into a sparring match.