HighScribe

@savannah_grace2009 (Almost tagged you @Livia XD)

Lukas

Lukas chewed on his lips for a moment, resting his elbows on the bridge railing. The river gurgled by, providing fresh water for the fountain in the middle of the courtyard. He tried to get the words flowing as fast as this river, but nothing was coming to him. Whenever Lukas was…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

If you gave me a deadline, I’d be totally down for it! Sometimes I’m busy with school and whatnot, but if I have a deadline, I’ll be sure to get to it and give you some feedback!

@keilah-h

He’s still a character of Wond, but otherwise he’s unrelated to my other stories.

@savannah_grace2009

Sure! I still have off of school for another week, so I’ll have plenty of time.

@savannah_grace2009

Sure, I can. I’m taking a break from my own WIP, so I definitely have some time to read through it. The link is the one on your profile page?

@whalekeeper

Sorry, I forgot about your question regarding a book that turns into a fantasy book part way through.

I haven’t read A Series of Unfortunate Events, but I have read some other books where reality becomes fantasy. Here are some ideas for you for your foreshadowing:

• Fantasy Ideas: Maybe you could have some things like one character…

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@savannah_grace2009

I’d be willing to help for sure! I may not have a tone of time, but I’ll do what I can!

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle

Thank you for the feedback! I’m about to go edit the short story the scene is in, so this will be very helpful.

@the_lost-journal

So what chapter are you on right now? 

TNPT: The Cost is now finished. 34 chapters + a prologue and discussion questions. I’m just getting feedback for now before I start working on Book II.

Also how are you so brave?! I would be so scared that people would judge my writing. That’s why I stoped with the short story I was sh…

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Okay, guys…I’m just going to start tagging everyone I can think of lol

Would anyone be interested in reading through/critiquing/giving suggestions on my WIP?

I love writing, but it’s hard to write when I’m not sure if people would even be interested in reading it or if it’s actually trash lollll

Not that I care what people think, but it…[Read more]

@theshadow

Sorry, just saw this now. I haven’t been able to read it for a bit with school picking up now. Sorry, hopefully at some point I’ll catch up.

That’s okay. If your too busy don’t feel like you have to read this. Thank you for letting me know where you are.

@loopylin

Reading it right now! Sorry, I’ve gotten behind. I’ll let you know my thoughts once I’m done :]

Awesome! Thank you!

Don’t know if I’ve said this before, but the way Lyens name everything is hilarious XD

Sometimes, limits bring out creativity. I was struggling to come up with names for them, other than the names I am currently using, so…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Thanks!!!

Aubrielle’s her older sister.

@rae

Amazing scene! And I agree with Whaley. Not too repetitive, but maybe substitute a few of those “Fathers” with something like, “The man” or something. Not too much of that either, but just enough to brake up the monotony of “Father”

@savannah_grace2009

Ooh I love desert settings! Too bad Liv doesn’t feel the same way – and too bad she is so exhausted, for that matter. Is this sister older or younger than her?

@rae

I don’t think it’s too repetitive, except for this bit at the beginning:

Baron knocked and entered his Father’s quarters. He knelt. “You sent for me, Fat…

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@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h

So…I just wrote this scene and i was wondering if it’s a little weird that I call the guy ‘Father’ all the time instead of giving him a real name. He isn’t a priest and he isn’t even Baron’s biological father. The reason I don’t give him a real name is that Baron doesn’t know what his real name is, he…[Read more]

@theshadow

Lol, we’re talking about charries as if they’re children or siblings now

How do you deal with him? He seems a little tough.

We make fun of each other. There have been times I’m in a conversation with other people and we’re talking about annoying things, and I’ll go like “You hear that Silvanis? That sounds just like you!”. He usually…[Read more]

@keilah-h

by the way you did finish the fic right?

Oh dear, I forgot to tell you with CWW and going back to school, sorry!

I really really liked the ending! It was so sweet. My only criticism would be I kinda didn’t understand fully what was going on before that point, Otherwise, it was great!