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@linus-smallprint

Considering the circumstances, I don’t think the above will go through his mind. I think he’ll run there because that’s the only place he can go really, and he’s going to be having a really, really hard time. It’s going to be surprising if he thinks clearly enough to get back there without getting lost or injured. Then he gets…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Is it bad that it was reversed?

I’m not convinced by Julian telling Dian the gospel in that moment

Ugh.

I had that feeling as I was editing it.

Hmm…. I might possibly chuck that section altogether………..

So is it bad that Julian responded differently?

Well….. I think that might be because that tends to be w…[Read more]

And there may be other ways to get Alan with his friends that would work better.

I should mention that Alan acctually doesn’t even know if his friends are still there, thinking Stripe might have gotten them to move on.

@ellette-giselle @theducktator @whalekeeper

Okay, another question for all of you. I’m wondering if Alan would even return to the abandoned village. After he escapes the prison, he starts heading there since he has nowhere else to go in the moment, but then it occurs to him that the Wizards will probably look for him there. His friends are in…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Well that is exactly how you should picture him! Bravo! 👏🏻

Wow. That’s like… a first for me.

I thought about having a POV for him….. but that will start fracturing into lots of POVs and the question will be, “Why Rolf over Aelic and Roland?” and then I’ll have five POVs going.

Yup. Well, no need to go into Rolf’s head.…

@ellette-giselle @theducktator @whalekeeper

All right. Thank you for your thoughts. I might try the first draft with the henchmen, and if I don’t like them, I can pull them out later.

Acctually, the sarcastic henchmen who always wonder how they ended up with their job are some of the henchmen I like, but I don’t think that fits TNPT, so I’ll see…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Leon’s prayer at the beginning was what I was expecting to be going through Rolf’s head instead, then Leon being the one who encourages as he has gone through so much more. I was supprised when it was reversed!

I’m not convinced by Julian telling Dian the gospel in that moment. Both before and after, he is caught in grief over…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

That’s insane, but yeah, at least the class all knew it was wrong. Thanks for the inspiration!

@ellette-giselle

I feel like I’ve heard that song before, but I can’t tell if I actually have or if it is just similar to another song I’ve heard before. I can see why you waited to post this until after Rolf and Leon were captured. It fits much more now that that happened.

I remember reading the book in the first meme you posted. It’s called All…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Yeah, it’s rough, I feel you. Exactly, it’s just that sometimes the things that feel so big to us don’t matter so much to other people, or they’re too hard to explain.

Okay, sounds good! Hopefully someday we can plan one you’ll be able to make. 😊

@ellette-giselle

Wow, that’s messed up. At least you all had the support of your class.

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @stephie

Thank you!

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Leon woke in the darkness. He heard Rolf breathing and felt the rocking of the ship below him. He sat up, wondering where they were going and what fate lay ahead. Leon leaned against the side of the ship’s hold and drew his knees to his chest,…

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@liberty

I think so! Send it!

@stephie

*Laughs* Sounds like you know how to steel the show.

@savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @rae

THIS IS HOW WE MADE UP WYOH

Ohhh yeah… I totally forgot about that. That was really weird!

I really enjoy reminiscing about the Character Party RP, even though Ottoline (and my writing in general) is SO CLICHE and CRINGE…it’s still so funny hahaha

Yep, that era was pretty great! We’ve tried so man…[Read more]

@liberty

Yeah I know. At first I could never see it fitting, but the more I listened to it the more I kept thinking about these guys, (specifically Leon for some reason) so now it has to be the book theme song, because I think about them every time. 😂

Ah, I get it.

We didn’t do Aladdin because of the clothing the girls are wearing. I have…[Read more]