HighScribe

@linus-smallprint

No problem, it just confused me and I wondered if I was misunderstanding.

Okay, that makes more sense. Lol! That’s really weird.

Yeah, I’m trying not to spoil anything, but it seems like it will still work… possibly. I’m not sure if the glitch on the page (with the mysterious text box) is the best way to go, but it will do…[Read more]

@rae

I’m a little swamped, but tag me and I’ll try to join at some point. 😊

@rae

I like it! I think the part in the field is the only thing I would fix honestly. But that’s your choice.

Like I said, it’s a delayed hit.

I’ll probably cry tonight. 😂

Except maybe the slave part. It dosen’t feel odd that all the slaves are men, even if there could be, and have been female slaves.

@koshka

Imperial soldiers are young.

I only have two other teens.

@ellette-giselle

This is a big step for me! I used to only write people my own age or eighteen. Eighteen was the magic year that was always perfect to write. 😂

I know. I like to write characters that are that age as well. Alan, Martha, Eric, James, and Tyn are all not too far from that (Oliver’s a few years older).

Just in the setting you have,…[Read more]

@keilah-h

But that makes me think. Maybe there should be other books set in this universe besides the Narrow Path trilogy. You have an equivalent to all the continents, and species to inhabit them, but TNP only focuses on New Sahvanna for obvious reasons, and we only really get to see the lyens’ culture (unless the third book has them traveling t…

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@whalekeeper

And also, nice drawing! I now understand. XD I thought she was a lot less humanoid.

Thank you! Kentor are the most human of all the non-human races. I have a reason for this in the lore, but may not explore it in this series. Hint: it has to do with Kunulfs, the other species native to the area, being more animal than normal.

With…

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@hybridlore

Sorry, I meant to say below.

So if I’m understanding what you’re saying, with the way code works, a possible explanation for the mysterious box is that someone accidentally deleted the part of the code that told the page to ignore it?

Yes, basically. Think of it like a green traffic light saying go (–>), but the traffic lights nev…[Read more]

And also, nice drawing! I now understand. XD I thought she was a lot less humanoid.

@linus-smallprint

So when Alan joins The Faithful, and suddenly his behaviour changes (such as his reasons to fight), she is disturbed by this. To her, this kind of looks like he is giving up his independent thinking to some big jerk who thinks he has a right to do whatever he wants with the world.

Ah, there we go! That makes sense. Instead of her…[Read more]

@keilah-h @theducktator @ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper

Chapter the 4th is out!

@ellette-giselle

I like how that article covers previous names for the condition. That’s cool. 🙃

@rae

I was just thinking about art challenges today. I might not do all of them. 😆 But I’d try my best whenever there’s free time.

@rae

Oh great idea, I’m interested too!!

@mineralizedwritings

np!

Will do

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @grcr @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @anyone-else

So I just got an idea. Recently I’ve been enjoying doing some art challenges to help me grow in some weak points in my art, and was wondering if we could do an art challenge together each week or two. Anyone interesting?

If people are, I’ll create a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I was slightly sad that I didn’t make much effect (though what was I expecting when the writing for this final story was sub-par). i was hoping that the story would hit even if the writing didn’t, but I’m quite content after reading your last comment.

I will rewrite this story later, and then I hope it hits harder.

For now, I’m…[Read more]

@liberty

Liberty…..

you are insufferable.

😂

NOTHING about Marius and the prince?

 

Oh, and…Dietrich sounds like a very interesting character. I hope you don’t kill him since I like him.

CALLED IT!!

As I was editing I was like….. this is going to be her favorite character!

@koshka

Uh, 21 is still between 16-30