HighScribe

@ellette-giselle

YAYYYYY

I love it when you give me critiques because you literally always help me, whether telling me things I need to change or what I’m doing well, no matter what it is it always builds me up in the end, I appreciate you so much girl <3

@savannah_grace2009

It’s good! definitely a better place to start. I like it, and I like the way your characters seem better shaped.

Keep it up!

@ellette-giselle @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @theducktator @whalekeeper @rae @anyone-else

Here’s another unedited scene…

This is like the third chapter I think:

Lilitu, in fact, was not dead.

Though at the moment, he wished he were.

And if he couldn’t bring himself to get off the ground and keep running for his life, he would be.

His f…

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AH AH AH AH

EEEEEEEEE

me speak no english.

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but me have picture.

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It’s actually not quite done but I wanted to share it anyway cuz he so cute and I’m very happy with it so far. Oh, but ignore his right hand. Some things just don’t click.

He is my quiet observant pessimistic almost-heartless cold boyy Sverre…

@theducktator

AHHHHHH I knowwww!!!!

Aw yeah :/ she just needs a hug 🥺🥺🥺🥺

@keilah-h

my dad had a flamenco album I used to listen to a lot when I was little haha

Spanish music is the best! I don’t understand anything they’re singing though.

@highscribeofaetherium

🤣🤣🤣

@ellette-giselle

not that I know of. Sadly that’s often the way life works. I feel like it gets redundant if all the characters get to become Christians before something bad happens. You know.

Yes. It’s not always God’s will to save everyone we want to be saved, and I’m kind of glad you included it because of that. Your story could become d…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

lol. right!

@ellette-giselle

Hard to be friendly when you have sharp teeth.

*Sends meme to my sister (not the one who wrote A Parched Land)*

@linus-smallprint

yes, it was, and then I had another Ezra and forgot about that Ezra and it became a mess.

This was a sad scene. Was Liam a Christian? It seemed like there hadn’t been a chance to even share the gospel with him.

not that I know of. Sadly that’s often the way life works. I feel like it gets redundant if all the characters get t…[Read more]

@liberty

No, I’m concentrating on finishing my main WIP right now. Maybe in the new year I will participate in one of these.

Also, saw your wolf drawing here. I like wolves. Nice!

@highscribeofaetherium

Yeah, ofc, use them for whatever you want.

Thank you!

@ellette-giselle

Was Liam’s original name Ezra? I caught a second sentence other than the one hybrid mentioned where you called him that instead:

Sabina kept on doing it, and Ezra relaxed. Sabina pressed gentle fingers against his wrist and then looked up at Joseph. “He’s slipping,” she said softly.

This was a sad scene. Was Liam a Chris…[Read more]

@liberty @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @esther-c @everyone-else

I signed up!!

@loopylin

Zeke?

@hybridlore

Thanks so much for the feedback!

Oh, I’ll take a look at those sections you mentioned. Thanks!

@ellette-giselle

I love it!! I was definitely surprised, that Amelia and Joseph wanted to adopt him so soon. We didn’t really get to see Sabina’s reaction.

I just caught two typos:

Without a word, Sabina gathered him up in her arms, and Ezra laid his head against her, his eyes closing. Sabina rocked him, humming softly.

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Look what I found in my drawing files! I completely forgot about this one, drew her probably a year ago. This is some weird concept art but I still like it. XD

@koshka

Thanks for entertaining my vague question! I figured it out.