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@koshka

YAY!!!!!

 

Oh wow!!!

I love this!!!

 

Okay, two things I noticed.

One, you used the word “fell” twice in one sentence referring to the pen.

 

two… I got the characters mixed up a bit….

Brin and Brinni are the same person.

 

Krazsimir and Kras are the same….

 

who is Vrati?

 

Is he a third character?

 

If so, could…[Read more]

@hybridlore

 

You got the section from today I’m assuming….

Or did you write that in reply to what I said yesterday?

@ellette-giselle

Ohhhhh! Now I remember him! My bad—I thought Leon had recognized him.

@freed_and_redeemed   @hybridlore    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty   @linus-smallprint

 

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Sorry this is so short. Bridal shower and 3 graduation parties……… plus more. It’s a crazy day……..

The next morning, Leon and Julian enjoyed a hearty breakfast with Amarin, Adeline, and Andreas.

“Ho…

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@the_lost-journal

Of course. I’m thankful God could use me to encourage you in any way. He will help you, if you but ask.

 

Here’s the full verse and reference.

 

No trial has overtaken you that is not faced by others. And God is faithful: He will not let you be tried beyond what you are able to bear, but with the trial will also provide a…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Oof, Wyoh was probably hacking you computer or smth XD

Yeah, probably lolol XD XD

Well, it’s okay… I guess… I think everyone could be a little bit of a bully from time to time.

*nods*

Yeah, I was looking over what I said, and what I meant to say what if it was someone close to you who was the killer?

“Ohhh, I see ya now. Hmm… I’…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Well hey, God has made you this age at this time for a reason. The Devil would love for this year to be a complete and total wreck, but the good thing is, you serve a King who is far higher than any prince of darkness. Pray for strength, get out your Bible and read, (psalms are a great place to go when you’re having a hard time)…[Read more]

@keilah-h

as a character

@keilah-h

it’s an alternate Europe. If that makes sense.

yeah.  That was a roller coaster chapter. Any thoughts on Andreas?

Oooo! I’ll have to listen to the song!

@linus-smallprint

Ooo, mysterious.
sadly, he’s not any of those. He was very much an Andreas, so I’ll have to find a name with the same flow, beats, meanings, and rhythm.
Naming a character is not a simple thing. 😂

 

@ellette-giselle

Well, you don’t have to change it, but it’s up to you.

Other ideas if you want them: Nickolas, Charles, Clive.

(I grabbed these names from a very specific source that I cannot name.)

@linus-smallprint

 

True, bit it sort of fit him. Now I’m not sure which name to use……

@ellette-giselle

Ugh. But I like his name. *pouts*

Then stash it in for a different character. It’s not a bad name.

@linus-smallprint

 

Ugh. But I like his name. *pouts*

 

Okay fine, I’ll see what I can do….

@ellette-giselle

Yes, it does. In fact, I like that idea. I’ll make a few tweaks.

Okay!

Ah yes, well, we were in Leon’s POV at the time.

I should make myself pay more attention to whose POV you are using, because I haven’t really other than when they are separated.

btw, any thoughts on Andreas?

I’m trying to recall people from the last book. Per…[Read more]

Oh My GoOdNeSs… my computer almost erased my message…….!!

 

@the_lost-journal

Thanks, your family sounds pretty cool too! And I didn’t mean to insult you are anything…

“Awh, yeah, nah. It’s good—not offended at all.”

Wow, so you’ve bullied someone before…? That’s a little surprising.

*laughs a little in a half embarrassed half remorseful w…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

They found thirty of fifty+. The others just are no where to be found. So they might be dead.

 

And yeah they hated it. It was basically a fortress for the Christian operations.

Ah yes, “I”

 

Does that make sense?

Yes, it does. In fact, I like that idea. I’ll make a few tweaks.

 

I was confused through these paragraphs.…

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@ellette-giselle

They reached the green and came to a stop. The castle-like University–– haven to so much work in the spread of Christianity–– was nearly destroyed. It had been hit many times by siege weapons, and the towers and walls were caved-in and crumbling.

Wow. They really hated that university. Yikes. No survivors again?

“He’s one of the…

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@the_lost-journal

Sorry it wasn’t happy.☹️ Do you at least get to start driving?