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@godlyfantasy12

Godlyyyy

You’re here, madam ghost. I see you on the Currently Active bar.

@ellette-giselle

They’re not showing up on the link for me.

@ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator

Chapter the 34th out!

@liberty

Gotcha.

@keilah-h

Fr. I don’t want characters to agree with me all the time, because then there would be nothing to think about.

@whalekeeper

haha.

@whalekeeper

I like it! Isaiah and Cedrick are more interesting together than apart.

Glad to hear they are a good combo. Sometime what make a good character isn’t so much who he is, but who he’s with.

As for the world, your inspiration photos are close to what I pictured while I read. There was this sense of dry coldness in the described…

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@ellette-giselle

Wait what? You mean you don’t use spell check for the other book and still manage to have something readable?!

I didn’t know other writers couldn’t spell until I joined KP. XD I’ve rarely needed spell check. But my handwriting is horrible, and people can’t read it, so the skills balance out.

@linus-smallprint

Lolololol. I’ve gotten to the point where spellcheck knows my shortcuts and auto-corrects for me. It only messes up sometimes. But still….. mine can be a bit of a mess once I’m though, and I always run edits before posting.

@ellette-giselle

*laughing very hard* *stops* Wait what? You mean you don’t use spell check for the other book and still manage to have something readable?!

If I did that…… *shudders*

Lucky boy. I can’t believe your brain lets you do that.

Um… yes. I’m following the rule of first drafts to ignore grammar and turn off spell check. I guess I…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I like it! Isaiah and Cedrick are more interesting together than apart. Isaiah’s “code” doesn’t bother me. I mean, it would bother me in real life. But it’s fun when a character has a specific part of their personality that takes action easily. In this case, it’s bitterness. Isaiah could easily become part of a political plot…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Commenting privileges granted

@keilah-h

You can’t comment? I can go fix that.

@linus-smallprint

Okay! Most people seem to be reacting positively to this, so I will definitely conciser coming back

Yes please.

Interesting. Did you find it confusing at all when it switched to reveal that Cedrick was narrating everything?

Uh… not really sure. At the moment I was just in speed-read mode, not really edit mode. I was…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I didn’t! Where’s the appendix?

Right after the story in the same document

@ellette-giselle

Hey! Scythe! My dad and brothers LOVE that game. Funny thing is, I can’t stand it, but I’m the one that got them into it by buying it for them. 😂 Weirdly enough, I was picturing this kingdom like the scythe art, so that’s super funny.

It is a neat world, and the artwork is very good (though I wouldn’t recommend looking the artis…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Isaiah really does have a wonky moral code, ngl.

I know. But that’s what makes him interesting and why I had to write this down.

I like how the perspective is that of the not-dog, whatever he is. Him getting distracted by the food was hilarious.

Did you see that note in the appendix explaining what he is?

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Next Chapters!!! (2 of them!!!)

@linus-smallprint

Thanks.