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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week ago
Praying 🙏 🙏 God is with you and your family, even when it’s hard to see Him or trust. I love these verses from Psalm 16  —
“I will bless the Lord who guides me; even at night my heart instructs me. I know the Lord is always with me. I will not be shaken, for he is right beside me. No wonder my heart is glad, and I rejoice. My body r…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
It just occurred to me that we might be the only reason KP is still going….. The Meet the Team page has gone down from like five people to now only one—Reagan Ramm. Kathleen isn’t even on there….
😳
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
Sounds good.
Whoa! Interrogate is a strong word!
lol
Okay, well i don’t like him very much. he seems weak and kinda sulky. I mean. I don’t know, he’s a coward, and I don’t like cowards. I feel a redemption arch, but at the moment it’s hard to see. So yeah, I’m hoping for redemption, but I’m not liking him right now.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
I had no idea what that picture was from. i just saw the meme the other day and thought of it. It was perfect.
Sounds like you are speaking form experience here
Let’s just say, a long time ago, the last fight I had with my brother ended when mom duct taped our wrists together.
For the whole day.
We had to do school t…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
By the way, you keep on interrogating me about Leon. So I want to interrogate you on Eric. What do you think about him now? Where do you think things are going to go for him?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
I guess it would not be beyond Tyn to try to break off from the other soldiers and see if she can contribute more. I’ll see what I can do with that. Thanks!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
Just watching Avatar the Last Airbender for the first time with my sibling in. 12 Chapters into Book 1 right now. Prince Zuko and his uncle have been my favourite characters so far.
Lol. It’s very affective. Trust me…………..
Sounds like you are speaking form experience here.
well I want Joseph to have SOME faith. Plus, its easy…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
Ooo, that chapter was very well written. I was feeling very tense, even though I knew what was going to happen. lol.
Yeah, Tyn is in a good position. Have her do it. This will be so, so bad for Eric. Plus, Tyn is in a bad mood, so she may even scold him.
I have never met a guy that didn’t absolutely hate it when a girl scolded him.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
Here is the unfinished chapter. (Anyone else who want to read it and/or help me out can as well)
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
Give me five minutes please, and I will try to post what I have written so far so that you will have the context you need. Warning, there may be more inconcitecies/grammer mistakes in here than usual. And this is going to be a long chapter. (I might split it into two for my third draft.)
(Oh, you know what would really smart? Is…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
Yup, it’s Eric. (How did you know?)
um…. because it was obvious since Martha got captured that he was a liability, and by the chapter you just wrote I knew he was going to get caught or alert the soldiers or something. (I may overstudy literary patterns.)
Sooo, maybe I’m blind, but I’m not seeing the problem……….. w…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
It occurs to me that Sabina and Julian are similar. Both have a brother who became a Christian, and they both thought he had gone crazy, which made them resistant to hearing the gospel and angry at whoever shared it with their brother. So I’m wondering if Sabina is going to recall how she acted and how this may impact her i…
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-GRCR- posted an update 1 week ago
Dirty water splashed on my heavy boots as I made my way through Bröijin—the largest of Englroy’s abandoned prisons. Something dripped from the roof—likely old water that had been trapped in the room above. A few doors creaked as they swung on their rusting hinges. There was a draft blowing from somewhere, but I could no longer feel it as I turned…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 1 week ago
plus it all depends on where you caught them in their arcs.
I’m planning to use creative liberties because of this, lol. After all, if some of these people turn violent in the game, that’s not accurate to their canon internal values. This is alternate noncanon; the most moral, innocent character might defenestrate their…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 week ago
Yup. That fits. I think I deserved that.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
If you could share a bit more detail I might have an easier time coming up with ideas.
Yup, it’s Eric. (How did you know?)
Eric was hiding by the blockade, where he was waiting for any of the rescued Faithful to show up. However, he made the mistake of hiding to close and was spotted when some soldiers dismounted to see if they…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 week ago
Did you draw all of these?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 week ago
Its, its… BEAUTIFUL!!! 😭😭😭😭 I am crying TEARS of JOY!
Thank you.
Is the magic potato going to answer my poorly poetic question, or am I going to just have to trust it has good intentions?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
There was a little box holding the ring that had been his mother’s. Her favorite shawl was folded beside his father’s hunting knife. His very own Bible lay with the treasures, and beside it were several shiny stone from the creek that flowed through his father’s farm. Joseph leaned forward and set the papers gently back into the b…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 week ago
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