HighScribe

@whalekeper

That’s a lot, haha. I bet many of them are siblings to the protagonists.

Well actually yeah, pretty much! 😅😆 Siblings or (school) friends lolol.

@hybridlore

You’re welcome!

For Alec’s arc, I was expecting him to do something in the climax that would impact either Sara or Cole. Prehapes both of them. Something like helping Sara, telling Witlock that he can’t work there anymore, helping Cole ‘protect’ Sara, or even standing up to Cole and trying to stop him.

I think chapter 55 wouldn’t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Wow! That was so tense! I can’t wait for Cassion to tell them!

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FORTH CHAPTER TODAY

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THIRD CHAPTER TODAY

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SECOND CHAPTER TODAY

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FIRST CHAPTER TODAY

@linus-smallprint

Thank you so much!

I know some of us were discussing this during the book, but I like the idea of showing Sara and Cole’s closer relationship in the beginning of the book. I’m going to look and see if I can insert this into the early chapters.

I see what you mean about Alec being a pretty stagnant character during the book.…[Read more]

@theshadow

Thank you for the concern, it’s so kind of you! Your right on the money, I have noticed I’ve become a bit obsessive/overly scrupulous about things recently, so as you mentioned I will look into OCD.

No problem! 🙃 I hope you find some helpful material. Just let me know if you want me to link some stuff that’s helped me before! Pra…[Read more]

@hybridlore

well i’ll try to add more later. i’m busy at the moment.

@ellette-giselle

You’re just going to leave us on that?? 🥺

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a third new chapter!

@hybridlore

Thanks!

More in a minute….

@ellette-giselle

Aww. Those were good.

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another new chapter!

@hybridlore

I have added my feedback to your file!

ugh. Still doesn’t work.

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1st chapter of today.

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4th chapter today.