HighScribe

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

As for the church leaving… they did. They left the city, but there is no place to run to, and while they did go underground, there is still the fact that 1. the will be discovered, it’s only a matter of time, and 2. evil is running rampant and unchecked.

Okay, that makes sense.

Read the Crown and Covenant Tri…

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@koshka     @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon    @theducktator    @grcr     @whalekeeper     @power    @hybridlore     @liberty

ANOTHER NEW CHAPTER

Shall post two more today if I can.

@ellette-giselle

Is a POV blind spot bad?

Nah, not really. Depends on how you handle it. Females are 50% of the population and many of them must be firstborns. We know very little about them. It’s a world building thing, and you’ve had to choose where to spend your effort, so it’s not surprising you haven’t included them.

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nope. Still no pictures.

@grcr

GOODNESS!

@hybridlore   @keilah-h

That is true, and I have mentioned females a few times, but 618 in not really in contact with them. It will come out a little more now that he works with the Agents, though they are mostly military focused.

@whalekeeper

Is a POV blind spot bad?

But anyhow, I’m glad everyone likes to see the soldier side of t…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

*cries in corner with you*

Random thought/note. I recently made a list of every character of mine… at least, that I could think of. I want to draw them all eventually. 🤤✍🏼 I have 606 characters. 400 are male and 206 are female.

hee hee

@theshadow

Yeah, it’s pretty cool!

And if you don’t enjoy rock, that’s fine. Sometimes certain genres bothers a person and they don’t know why. It’s just a fact of their life. Many country songs rub me off the wrong way, and I don’t know why. 🤷‍♀️

You might have to explain what that thing is though XD.

Synesthesia? That’s where a person has de…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

*Cries in a corner*

I do like how in this book, we’re getting to see the perspective of one of the soldiers.

True.

It is also true, I forgot. We only have one female character so far. Other than what I call “extras.” And she isn’t from the city, so we have a POV blind spot, so to speak.

@keilah-h

Huh. I guess that would make sense.

Ellette, if that’s true, maybe make that clearer?

@ellette-giselle ^^

Yes, I think he’s going to do that.

I do like how in this book, we’re getting to see the perspective of one of the soldiers. This is a strong part of the world building, so it’s nice to get a deeper look into it.

Is it just boys who are taken, or are there girls too? Because I feel like you might have mentioned something about there being a girl at the rehab center but I hav…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Perfect.

Oh, you think he’s gonna do that? Hmmm.

@ellette-giselle

I commented after I finished the third one. 🙃

@hybridlore

Thanks! Have you read all three? Or just the two ones from this morning?

@whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint

Alright, we’ll see if he responds!

@ellette-giselle

Wow. This is getting intense.

Good chapters!