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@hybridlore

Yay!!!

Hmmm, yeah, I guess I’m not as bad as some people think. XD

@ellette-giselle

Yay! KP is back!

Good chapters. They made it out of there pretty easily. I thought that was going to be tough…

@koshka     @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon    @theducktator    @grcr     @whalekeeper     @power    @hybridlore     @liberty

Two new chapters

and keep checking the doc,  because KP ate the posts I sent earlier.

If KP errors out and asks me one more time if I’m sure I want to do something………….@keilah-hNo problem! Take all the time you need. (but not too long. XD)  

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a third new chapter!

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New chapter!

Also, I posted chapter 37 last night, but KP has been acting up so I don’t know if anyone saw the message. 

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Third chapter!

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Second chapter!

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new chapter!

P.O.V.

You might live in some old murder mystery because on all the main roads in the town and the highway leading into it, there are these strange stains of dark red splashes on the road that cover the road for about five feet as if someone poured a big bucket of whatever it is on the road. There is one stain on each of the main roads and two…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

If you have another book later on that doesn’t have Christian rebellion as a major component, I will be happy to help, so feel free to tag me then!

Will do! 🫡

@ellette-giselle

You’re welcome!

(Odd how it’s so clear in your mind and then someone tells you what they though you said and it’s not at all what you meant. I find this in writing and in speaking.)

Yup. Another reason for proofreading.

If you have another book later on that doesn’t have Christian rebellion as a major component, I will be hap…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Yay! Thanks!

Let me take a look.

Wow, that was some great feedback, even though we don’t agree on the rebellion thing. So thank you for taking the time to reply, even though you don’t like the book as much as some others.

I can mix up a few of those scenes like you suggested, and I can reword a couple things, because…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Book feedback for you!

Sector 5 Book Feedback

@whalekeper

That’s a lot, haha. I bet many of them are siblings to the protagonists.

Well actually yeah, pretty much! 😅😆 Siblings or (school) friends lolol.

@hybridlore

You’re welcome!

For Alec’s arc, I was expecting him to do something in the climax that would impact either Sara or Cole. Prehapes both of them. Something like helping Sara, telling Witlock that he can’t work there anymore, helping Cole ‘protect’ Sara, or even standing up to Cole and trying to stop him.

I think chapter 55 wouldn’t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Wow! That was so tense! I can’t wait for Cassion to tell them!

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FORTH CHAPTER TODAY

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THIRD CHAPTER TODAY

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SECOND CHAPTER TODAY