HighScribe

@theducktator

Mine too (though I think Oathbringer has the coolest climax ever)

@theducktator

It’s not that I don’t like Kaladin, it’s just that sometimes he annoys me.

Ah, ok. That’s actually a good idea, I only read the rest of the series last year but I forgot a lot of stuff already lol.

Which book is your favorite?

@theducktator

Eh, I kinda might agree with your brother 🫣 not completely, but I think he has a point. While I think Kaladin does have some good development at some points in the series, a lot of the time I feel he’s just a bit too extreme.

Sorry.

Have you read Wind and Truth  yet? (if you have no spoilers cuz I’m only on day five)

@rae

You’re welcome!

Ah, ok thanks for the explanations 👍

@rae

I haven’t read the second part yet, but I’ll critique the first section first.

Keep in mind that this is all my opinion, and you can ignore what you want.

Your first sentence is good. I don’t have any critique for it.

The second sentence has a couple things.

Halfbreed of man and elf, Max lacked the pointed ears and the knifelike sharp…

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@the_lost-journal

No, I didn’t think that at all.

@the_lost-journal

Yes, I’m going to try to get one done today. I have to work on an art assignment that’s due today rn though ): (I guess I shouldn’t procrastinate on these things 🙄)

@the_lost-journal

Thanks for the tag! I don’t have time to answer now, but I’ll try once I get back from my winter camp.

@the_lost-journal

Ok, thanks! And that’s cool!

@the_lost-journal

Do you have a description or Rapha? I was imagining her was a human, but is she some sort of fish person?

@the_lost-journal

You find words of wisdom funny???? (LOL, thanks!)

lol you’re welcome.

@raxforge

My character, Kefa’s characters, and two of Jonas’ characters are on a boat on a river with some NPCs. They’re leaving the city.

@savannah_grace2009

Very well done scene!

@the_lost-journal

It’s a weekend camp some people from my church go to every year. It’s in winter, so that’s why it’s called snow camp (though it doesn’t seem like there’s gonna be any snow this year :/). I’m leaving tomorrow.

I’m 15.

I don’t like math so I didn’t care to do it!( ^-^)

I relate to this sentence lol.

Also, your signature is funny.

@rae

Alright! I’ll try to get some feedback to you later today, it might take a bit.

@rae

I read the first part, and this is great! Are you looking more for a sentence-by-sentence critique, or just overall feedback?

Today if I can.

@jonas

Ok, I’ll try to do something, hopefully before Snow Camp.

@loopylin

I know, I’m just not quite sure what to RP atm, so I was just offering to think something up if it would been helpful.