@hannahn
Active 3 years ago- Rank: Charismatic Rebel
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Ok so in this RP I say Liv has blue eyes, but correct me if I’m wrong. 😂
Lukas
Lukas found he couldn’t take his eyes off Liv’s face. He tried, but somehow, he found himself drowning in the crystalline pool of her blue eyes.
“Aww.” He heard a whisper pass by him. He blinked and looked behind him, only to see Fynn dance awa…[Read more]
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Smiley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 5 months ago
Wanda!!! I LOVE IT♡ YOU DID SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Esther replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
First of all, I love your writing!!
Second, my actual answer to your question. XD Ok. So I think I prefer the first one better. Though I do have an opinion on prologues… I heard an author (who had been writing since forever) say that he doesn’t like prologues because typically writers use them as a way to draw readers in bef…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
it’s all true though…I became such a better writer when I joined KP and after talking to all of you guys!!
I did to! I dont think I would have ever got this is close to finishing without everyone on here <3
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Ok, I read them both. The first one does pull me in better and I want to read more, but I just love the description and feel of the second, however, it may be a bit slow for the beginning chapter. That’s all I have for now, I will go over it more later today if I have time!
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
This is supposed to say “feel free to tag me in any post”…so yeah…XD
Dont worry, I understood XD I make errors like that all the time 😂
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Awww your dedication and acknowledgement is so sweet 🥰
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
I have skimmed through these pages here and read pieces of your WIP and I have to say… I love them! Your really good at describing the way things look and feel. I will defiantly look through your link and give my critique 🙂 And pretty soon I will be posting some of mine to get feedback, I’ll be sure to tag you 🙂
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
The dancing has begun!
Hehehe…
Alright, I’ll write some RPs
Lukas
Lukas swallowed hard and faced Liv with an uncertain smile wobbling on his lips. “Well?” He held out his arms.
@rae (I said in here that Chase was dancing, but I don’t know what you decided to do)
Callista
She smiled, all tears dried, and met Fynn’s ey…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Oh that’s awesome! You can tell her I love her name. 😉
I was trying to choose between Clementine, Maisie, Hallie, and Dixie. It was close between Maisie and Hallie, but Hallie won. 😁
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Allison posted an update 2 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76
Hi! We haven’t chatted in a while. I was wondering how you are doing? You ready for the holidays? <3 -
Smiley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Lol
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
*over here
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@smiley @anyone-else
*we authors over casually matchmaking our charries in an AU RP*
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Smiley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Okay if Easton isn’t taken then I could see him being a good match for Falon when Ev goes back to Ami
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Adrian
“Germany,” Esther explained. “Although I have lived in America for the past several years…what of both of you?”
“Aletheia,” Ev answered for the both of them.
Adrian wasn’t paying attention. He was still stuck on the word Fatherland. He tilted his head and looked towards Erich. “The Fatherland? What do you mean by that?…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Alright thanks!! And yeah, I know what you mean by abrupt. (:
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
I don’t mean to butt in on y’all’s conversation, but I just wanted to share my thoughts real quick, because I can understand what you’re going through.
It’s not easy to trust God, but He’s got a purpose, and I’m sure you know that. I’ve lost both grandparents on my mom’s side, and I’ve often wondered why God didn’t heal them ev…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 6 months ago
Of course. 😊💖
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Ev
“I can’t wait,” Falon said with a smile.
Ev smiled back but it felt unnatural. He met Falon’s eyes. She seemed to be racking her brain for something else to say. But something else seemed to float behind those dark eyes… and somehow, Ev knew he felt the same way.
“So…” Her fingers tapped nervously agasint her foam cup. “I heard t…[Read more]
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@freedomwriter76
I cant see any of your replies on the comments, they pop up in my email but not on here.. (I think also a while ago you chatted me and asked how I was doing and I couldn’t see it and I feel so bad that I never responded 😂) I got the one you sent me today too in my email…
Anyway, I’m sorry your weekend was rough, if you ever…[Read more]