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@freedomwriter76

Girl!!! I just found this…and it uhhh changed the way I saw Bucky

it’s kind of long

@hybridlore

Yeah, that totally makes sense! And you’re welcome, I really enjoyed reading it!!

For buildup, I’m not quite sure. Maybe Mason has a big decision to make, and something about the king helps him make that decision? Or maybe to keep it more line with what you have so far, something big rests on the identity of the king?? I’d have to…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Okay, I’m finally here!! XD

So, I was digging pretty hard to find something to critique, so I’ll do my best…

“A hint of fear is smothered in the master’s gruff tone.” – why the fear?? Just because of the curfew?

I agree that it was pretty obvious the man was going to be the king.

In first person it’s really easy to use “is” a lo…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Okay I love it and hate it at the same time!!!!

Also maybe you could write Clint struggling to be in his old house cause of memories of his mom and his dad

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

@freedomwriter76

*trying to hide all the spelling errors* I’m not sure why I can’t type on phone but I can’t lol

Yeahhh… I’m just a ray or sunshine today XD

Pietro!!!! Remember bow much Godly loved Perer, well Pietro and Wanda are mine (I feel like they’ve been mine for a while but still) if you hurt them you will have to speak to…[Read more]

Also uhhh I recently found the saddest parallel in the MCU

In age of ultron at Pietro’s death you can see relief on Clint’s face when he realizes him nor the kid were hurt but then he sees Pietro and his relief fades

And in endgame everyone’s so excited that they got the stones but then they realize Natasha didn’t come back

And finally when T…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Clint!!! He’s such a good friend!!!

Endgame makes me sob, Clint’s reaction is… 😭

Yesss Maria would be the best one to find her

Also an idea for Pietro is for him to like so many of them struggle with ptsd cause most people assume that Pietro struggled with that from.the bombing

(I don’t know why I always have so many ideas…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yeah… when I heard it there might have a few tears shed

Honestly the red room is like the most terrifying thing in marvel

But the more I learn about what they did with girls in Germany during WWII (like how they take girls of the perfect race in their opinion and have them… well I think you can figure out the rest) like the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Awwwwww… I hope you can make it

Also uh… so I’m bored in the car so I’ve been thinking about several things but then I remembered setting from agent Carter that you could use for Natasha

The show shows more details about the res room and one of them is that they handcuff the girls to their bed posts every night, so in…[Read more]

Also I’m texting on phone so please ignore errors

@freedomwriter76

I came in writing the scene not sure what I was going to do and then I had the idea of Peter grabbing a chocalte which led to that whole chaotic scene LOL

@freedomwriter76

Clint!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOO!!!!

I will most likely cry when you write that scene

Also yeah my leader told me to talk to my parents before I watch cause of the cussing and stuff, but it is defiantly on my movie watch list

Which is a really long list

@freedomwriter76

Thanks girl!! I’m glad you enjoyed it

I do have plans for Coltan, where something big might happen that will cause Payton to push herself farther from God

But I think I also figured something pretty big, Jane is one of my favs and the one I enjoy writing the most, but I was scared people wouldn’t want to read a book from…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

*gasps*

*reads*

*jumps up and down*

*calms down*

Yayyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can’t wait, and I completely understand rewriting it (I feel like I always love a fanfic and then I reread it and think about it a ton and I’m like nooooo I have to rewrite this XD)

Also I love…[Read more]

OH! And I have Hallie and Easton who I have not RPed for yet but will do so now…

…

Easton

“So, are you glad you came? You seem very confident with that waltz now.”

“Yep!” Hallie flashed him her signature smile. “I’m glad you came along.”

Easton bobbed his head in a small laugh. “Anytime. But…” he peered over the heads of students. “Looks lik…[Read more]

Oki. I don’t know how y’all want to switch it up, but I have Fynn, Callista, Lukas, Ami, and Ev available for any other charries to dance with rn. XD So take your pick, lol.

@savannah_grace2009

Ooh, I love it. 😁 I love dogs too. 😝

@rae

Nahimmmm!!! 😭

@hybridlore

I like it!! I can’t really think of any thing else to add besides what the others have said. But there was one paragraph that I was a little confused at:

My gaze snaps back to the ground. The source of the voice stands beside me—a man, maybe in his thirties. From his clothes and his unshaved face, he appears to be a worker of some kin…

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@trailblazer

Oh yeah, our tree is super full every year. And Mom and Dad don’t even put all of their ornaments on it. XD

Yessss! I’m in! Now that the holidays are over, I should be able to get back into a normal routine of writing again. (: