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@savannah_grace2009

Yea, that makes sense. I think the fact that we don’t even know what he did to offend them and that Ottoline is only part Azer makes that kind of convoluted, so you definitely want to explain it more.

The order of events makes it confusing. First he says ‘uh oh’ when he realizes she’s part Azer, then he says “well, I’m dead.” Then he has a violent reaction to something.

@jonas

Oh, sorry. I guess I didn’t make that clear.

No, the Pythonos just injected Marcurious with a poison to take away his powers (not permanently, just as long as he recieves the medication), and they made Ottoline watch so that she would fear them, but also because they don’t like to wait so they wanted her ready to take his place to…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Oh, okay. I think you could definitely make that clearer. So the point of the Pythonos doing that was to torture Ottoline by making her watch him in pain? And his reaction was caused by the experiments they were doing on him and not by Ottoline’s presence?

I’m (kinda) bored, so I am going to share another one of my NaNoWriMo novel’s character boards…

Soo… here is the one I made for Dehilikor (Deh-hily-core)… I am not too happy with it though, mostly because I cannot find a good picture that matches what I imagine him to look like… the one I used was the closest, but in my imagination, he…[Read more]

@jonas

Okay, so in his “list of accomplishments” it says that he managed to offend the entire branch of Azers (he’s really good at offending people), and their all out to get revenge. So he’s scared the Ottoline heard about what he did.

Usually when he says, well, I’m dead, that’s just his catch phrase, so he normally doesn’t die, but comes…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I’m caught up too. I don’t have any feedback right now, just a question:

Is Marcurious somehow allergic to Azers? And if Ottoline was a full Azer would he have died?

@grcr

Thanks XD

@savannah_grace2009

Aww, yours are great too!!

@acancello @mineralizedwritings @rae @trailblazer @esther-c

I will not allow this RP to die!!!!

haha

who wants to write the next RP?

@grcr

Why are yours so good??? I’m jealous, lol

here is another one of the MCs… this is Douger’s board…

@savannah_grace2009

Cool! 😅

@grcr

okay! I think i’ve used that a couple times for towns and rivers and such.

@thearcaneaxiom

Imagine the vessel is just the most dull character ever😂 That would be some interesting irony!

That would be funny, but I think it’s impossible or at least highly improbable. The Shard influences the vessel, so anyone with Whimsy would end up being…whimsical.

Even if the numbers aren’t innate, and that could very easily be a red h…

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@thearcaneaxiom

That would actually work to display the shards with this theory.

Oh wait, you already said that lol.

I’m guessing there is some pattern in the Shards, and whatever it is you could probably display it with that chart. The numbers might not be part of the pattern, because apparently Sanderson said that some of the shards have num…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Cool! That would actually work to display the shards with this theory. The red square would be Feel, the green one would be Unite, the blue would be change, and the yellow would be survive.

Whimsy is definitely one of most intriguing shards. I’m very interested in seeing what he/she is like.

And… Here is another one of the novel’s MCs….This is Repitor (Rep-eh-tore).

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks, but I feel like it’s to, to…undescriptive? I don’t know. It just doesn’t seem Nahim. It seems wrong, somehow.

Hopefully that makes sense…