hanako

@savannah_grace2009

What would the P in EP? Stand for? You might still be able to call it the Unit, even if there are multiple units, because the prisoners would fear it the most, so they might call it that even if there are technically multiple.

@esther-c

Yeah, ofc!

@jonas

In that case, maybe the prison could be split into several units and you could call this one the ‘Experimental Unit’

Okay, I like that. Maybe I could call it the EP instead of the UNIT for short? (I know, so creative…not.)

@koshka

Hello.

Now that we know each other, here’s a list of random questions about your WIP!

1. Does Igua like fish?

2. With such an aversion to butter knives, is eating butter a problem?

3. About how old is Igua at the beginning of your story?

4. What do you think inspired his character the most?

Hello, I’m called Ru or Ruee.

1. No, he d…[Read more]

@jonas

I love conviction! And oh my gosh, Flaz would drive Ellis insane, this is going to be hilarious!

@hybridlore

Oh! you didn’t have to read the entire thing today!!! Oh, well.

The biggest things I noticed were again, really long paragraphs. I think it would be easier to read if you split them up, but it’s up to you.

Yeah, I’ve only gotten to chapter four with my paragraph revisions

What did you think of the scene in The Deal? Ya, know, this pa…[Read more]

Okay, here’s chapter 7

CHAPTER 7-THE INVESTIGATONS
The suns were bright and shining over Ladance as two Laxdains came walking together through the dusty streets. One was taller, dressed in red coarse, but durable, clothing with a powerful blaster strapped to his side, from his thigh to his knee. The other was shorter, but with tailored and…

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@hanako

little huh?

@hybridlore

Yep, that’s fine! No problem!

@jonas

This is going to be great XD XD

@highscribeofaetherium

That will be hilarious. Conviction already knows some other talking swords, but I’m sure he’ll be interested in meeting another!

@jonas

I love Conviction 😂

Oh no. The character I’m going to use also has a talking sword lol.

Now I’m imagining just a couple of swords, having a conversation 🤣🤣

PRONUNCIATIONS
Note: pronunciations are in alphabetical order rather than by revelance.

Of characters:

Aiqa _ Aye-quh

Akin _ Aye-kin

Alin _ Aye-lin

Azio _ Ah-zee-oh

Budeca _ Buh-deck-ka

Canin _ Cane –in

Gaygarum _ gey-gar-rum

Ginja _ Gin-juh

Grostoff _ Grew-stof, staff with an ‘o’

Hallia _ Hall-ee-uh

Jonas _ Joe-nas

Knihan _ Knee-…

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@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @rae @trailblazer @highscribeofaetherium

I’m just going to post Ellis’s arrival scene now. It ends kind of abruptly because I don’t have anything for him to do before he encounters the rest of the group.

Ellis

One moment, the din of battle rang on Ellis’s ears as he charged t…[Read more]

@jonas

*thumbs up*

@highscribeofaetherium

Yeah, you might want to wait to actually write anything until everyone else gets a bit farther. My character hasn’t actually showed up yet. He’ll arrive separately, so it probably makes the most sense to do that for any new characters.

@hybridlore @thearcaneaxiom

I know you both expressed interest in this RP at the…[Read more]

Take your time reading, I just wanted to post them and get feedback so i know how to change them

@jonas

Ok! 😃 thanks, I’ll introduce my character later.

@jonas

lol 😂

CHAPTER 9-THE DEAL
Nahim tapped his foot in the rhythm of the song he hummed. Master Paul leaned back in the pilot seat next to him, maneuvering through a bunch of asteroids before picking up his direction and heading into Cubespace. Nahim suddenly stopped his noise as a bright nebulae passed by with a flash. Master Paul smiled.

“You like n…

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