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@savannah_grace2009

Lol I considered doing that XD

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, my scenes aren’t that emotional when I type them up on the spot…when I get into what I call the “mood” my scenes get too emotional. Ya know, balance is never there.

If I ever type that scene up when in a mood, I shall let you know.

@freedomwriter76

I am very proud of Hans, Felix, Star, and Night, plus Anna…six foot is a feat few horses can do, and few riders!

The next comment, forgive me if I offend.

He encouraged Night forward…forward…forward.

Clop. Clop. Clop!

“Now.”

He pulled up on the reins.

In one elegant jump, Night leapt over the stone wall.

Three beats.…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

*I walk in, see something about horses, must comment*

Hans pointed at the white spot on Star’s forehead, almost in the perfect shape of a night star. “Yep, Star. Here,” he tossed Anna an apple, “you can feed her.”

Are you aware that marking is in real life called a star? In fact, any white marking only the forehead of the horse…[Read more]

Reuben

“I’m sorry,” Reuben frowned, looking at Hudson, “I didn’t mean to intrude.”

“That’s alright, sir,” Hudson cracked a weak smile.

“Say, I wonder where the food is in this place?” Reuben glanced around.

Beside him, Hudson smiled again. Reuben could tell Hudson wasn’t sure whether to laugh or not.

@acancello

If Hugo was real…I would totally have a crush on him 😂😂😂 is that bad???

@freedomwriter76

I feel like all your characters are the same…XD they’re all guys who have abusive parents and some try to find God while others join the SS and murder people

(that’s not a bad thing, just me being observant and noticing a common theme, lol)

@rae

Oh my gosh that scene almost made me cry!!!!!!

@jonas

I pick Clydak. (just kidding, lol. That was the rebel in me, XD)

I pick Trare. (for real this time.)

@freedomwriter76

loves horses and books

FINALLY! A horse person!!!

(Is it just me, or can you guys see Bucky as a knight on a big black Friesian, or a beautiful dapple grey Percheron!)

@jonas

Razath.

@everyone

Ok, I’m gonna let you all pick one of my planets. I’ll add a character from that planet. The options are:

Adonial: the planet Ellis and Kate are from. It is essentially a traditional fantasy world.

Ildin: the planet Krenna and Vilsayor are from. It is a cave planet.

Oldonar: the planet Zash is from. You actually aren’t allowed to pi…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium @jonas

Yes, indeed, Ruee has three ideas, but she has only added two for clarification

@jonas

Ok.

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium

Yes, Ruee indeed has two villains.

@highscribeofaetherium

I think she has three ideas, but only added one so far.

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@jonas

Six, @Rae has two, right?

Alpha Grath

He has a profile like unto Nahim, except he has a little deeper voice.

“Alpha” meaning “first born” was created in a secret lab during the Sovereignty War. Originally created to have the looks of Nahim Nayhelm, but the powers of his true father by blood, Grathmere (fear and tremble at that name!), he was created to be the best…[Read more]

@everyone

Okay, it looks like that’s all the villains. Only five. I might add another, but I’ll have to invent one first.