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@esther-c

Livia

She wiped her eyes, determined to not let another tear fall.

“I haven’t prayed in a while,” she smiled bitterly. She shook her head. “I’m not even sure He hears me anymore. I just feel so…lost.”

@ellette-giselle

This is interesting so far! I love the idea of a historical fiction set in those earlier years! I also like your whole colosseum scene.

The main things I’m looking for at the moment would be is it intriguing, have I got a good first chapter hook. Are the characters defined, are you interested in them yet. etc. Basically all the t…

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@savannah_grace2009

Chase

Never…never be strong enough but…but… Chase closed his eyes, turning away a little bit, afraid that the pictures and memories flashing through his brain would come out in his eyes. Who else is going to help all those people? Those kids that are just like me. I have powers, I need to use them…and there’s the…[Read more]

@esther-c

Yes yes yes!!!!!!!

lol that’s so funny though!

Livia

She closed her eyes as he wrapped his arms around her.

But she felt numb.

All she felt was hurt…so much hurt…

“We had to sell Xandro,” all her attempts to keep from crying failed, and she let out a sob. “We had to sell everything and move to the poor district,” she leaned…[Read more]

@rae

Sef

“You don’t have to be strong enough,” Sef pulled away and looked up at him. “Because you never will be strong enough on your own. But when you ask the Great One for help, when you are weak, He is stronger!”

@ellette-giselle

So wait, I could submit a book I’m working on in one of the Forums and y’all would give me feedback!

Yes! 😊😊

I am always looking for honest critiques and it’s hard to find someone that will do it because they are all afraid of hurting my feelings. Even though I tell them that it’s not hurting but helping. I think it’s just a th…

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@trailblazer

And I’ve noticed the days that I miss it are the days that usually end up with things not going well or I’m in a bad mental state or something.

Me too!!!

@trailblazer

And sometimes when you’re used to hearing Him speak a certain way, God switches it up to get us out of our boxes and teach us how to expand our awareness of Him.

Exactly!!

Our culture also tells us to follow our hearts, but it’s not healthy, because emotions are so up and down- they aren’t stable. I heard a pastor say this once: “Emot…

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@keilah-h @theducktator

So, I started reading a First Aid and Personal Safety book of my Grandmother’s from the American Red Cross and it has not only good info to help yourself and others in case of an accident but also a lot of potentials all useful stuff for writing too! Like what to do when someone has an injury to the head, definitately will…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Aww thank you!!!

If you want to officially submit a story to KP, like I did on the website, you don’t even have to be a member or create an account to do that. So yes, you can submit one at any time!

If you want to just post a story for fun or critiques by anyone on KP, you don’t have to have a rank either…just make a new…[Read more]

@rae

Two weeks sounds good to me! I think that’s about the same amount of time as the first challenge.

Tenz sounds cute and cool—I’m excited to draw him!

Okay…

@keilah-h @grcr @loopylin @theshadow @linus-smallprint @idk

I’m going to do Tenz, my innocent little warrior who thinks water is only for drinking.

Tenz in his normal form

He is tall, towering over me at a little more than six feet, with a slim athletic build. An almost perfect balance of power and speed. Despite this, I can only ever…

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@theshadow

Thanks!! 😄💛

@linus-smallprint

Thanks for the challenge and the constructive criticism! I had fun, too! I don’t usually draw monsters or animals of any kind, so that was a fun change from my typical teenyboppers, lol. 😄😄

@ellette-giselle

haha, well, I write all of my stuff fast. The longest it ever took me to write a book was one month.

It’s the editing that takes forever.

Girl, I’m jealous…no matter how much I plan a book, it takes FOREVER to write!!! Editing is probably the easiest part for me!!

Actually, my brothers catch me doing that a lot. In fact, my c…

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@trailblazer

I’m not the most emotional person in the world, and especially when I was in middle school, I’d be at summer camp and see everyone around me crying and having these emotional encounters with God, and I would wonder what was wrong with me that I wasn’t “feeling” God like everyone else was.

I completely relate to this! I’ve had emoti…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

(Sorry this is late—I have a bad problem of stressing out and overthinking what I should say back… 😅)

It took me four days to write Fateful Night, but editing took several months!!

Ohh, that’s awesome!! My book has taken me over two years already and I’m nowhere near done, lol! I read your method and it sounds  quite in…[Read more]

Y’all, those look amazing!

@linus-smallprint

Yeah, I didn’t do this one, though Charles sounded really fun to draw.

@ellette-giselle

 The best way to ride is barefoot bareback!

YES YES YESSSSS!!!!!

Heyy! I’m Sara, though most people around here call me…well, they call me Sara. XD

Anyways, I’m a chocolate consuming, emotionally unstable, sleep deprived, algebra loving, public school attending sophomore (in highschool)! (I mean technically I’m a sophom…[Read more]