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@esther-c

Ohhhh my wordddd

Ok that actually makes so much sense. I felt like the story was moving too fast and wasn’t exactly sure how to slow it down.

Thanks for pointing that out!! <33

Glad I was able to help!!!!!

I do love your dialogue though…you’re so talented in that area!!! Just maybe breaking it up would help A LOT. Because too much o…[Read more]

@stephie

I feel like it totally depends on the situation.

Though, at least for me, something doesn’t feel right about saying “your religion is wrong and false.” Because that tends to get people defensive and push them away from Jesus. I feel way more comfortable with saying “I believe that there is only one God….(etc…)” and just sharing what…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I use Pinterest or simply type what I want into a search engine and click “Images”.

@anyone

I learned yesterday that we’re going to have a friend stay at our house all day next Saturday so I don’t think I’ll be able to join.

I think I’m gonna take Chase out of the hospital now.

Though, I could’ve brought him back earlier, seen as how no one apparently knew he went there anyways

Chase

Chase walked slowly down the sidewalk, looking down at his shoes. His left arm was in a sling, his head hurt terribly, and he was tired, but otherwise okay. He halted his slow walk…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

I love that idea! I’m interested.

thread, not forum :p

@artist-peoples-idk

Would anyone be interested in starting an art/illustration critique forum? Just curious, I think it might be fun, but I want to know if other people would want to before I create a new topic. Idk, just an idea. If nobody likes the idea that’s fine.

I can share more of what I had in mind if anyone would like.

@theducktator

One of my characters owns a pizza shop, Duck and Fred’s, and I made the Duck’s Special once. It made me so happy.

Awh cool! that’s so fun!! 🤩💛

@elishavet-elroi

Voice-claims! Yes! I got so happy when Sight and Sound’s David came out and the lead actor sounded like one of my characters.

💛💛

Research definitely counts as a hobby. And the food is so important. Have you cooked several of your traditional dishes?

Heh heh, not yet 😅 I’m still learning a lot of basics so it’ll probably be a while…[Read more]

@esther-c

Sorry I’m just now getting to this!!!!

My main critique would be that you spend a lot of time on dialogue. I kind of feel like we just got thrown into the story and all we know about the characters is because of what they say. Maybe breaking up some dialogue and really showing us who they characters are would help…it kind of feels l…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

tbh, I am also confused about the teachings  XD And I do wonder why. But also I get this feeling of fullness after going to confession. So whatever it is, I think I am going to stick to it! Also  thanks for the prayers. I won’t be able to get back to anyone for a while btw. I AM GOING SKIING! ^o^

I agree, it does help to tell oth…[Read more]

I only have a few hobbies tbh, but I don’t know how many of them bleed into writing. I do know a lot of the things I do revolve around my characters and their world. To be honest, I feel like writing bleeds into my other hobbies more than others do to it, especially considering my writing is the base for the future animations I plan to make.

I…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

okay hahahaha sounds good lol

@ellette-giselle

If Nar is his sister, he’s going to be furious that his new enemy is carrying around pictures of his sister. If Nar is a crush then he’s going to be really mad because it doesn’t seem like he would want everyone in kingdom come to know that he carries around her picture.

Nar is his sister, and he is very protective of her.…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

no I haven’t!!!

Doesn’t everyone have at least a fragment of virtue though? (Sorry, I don’t mean to shut down everything you’re saying, this is just my thoughts. 😅) I’m not saying they have to be someone that the readers will look up to and be like, “Oh my word I want to be just like them.” I understand mankind is sinful and there probably are people out there t…

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