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@rae @highscribeofaetherium @both-torres @whalekeeper

(KP ate my post!)

Allow me to get us up and rolling again.

Kazriac

Kazriac stood silently in the dark room for sometime. He heard voices outside, arguing. Hunans and their petty squabbles. Still he waited. He was patient. There was no reason to rush when you were immortal.

Finally, things…[Read more]

@rae @highscribeofaetherium @beth-torres @whalekeeper

Allow me to get us ip and rolling again.

Kazriac

Kazriac stoid silently in the dark room for sometime. He heard voices outside, arguing. Hunans and their petty squabbles. Still he waited. He was patient. There was no reason to rush when you were immortal.

Finally, things escalated to the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Just so you know, it seems that you have that google doc set up as view only. It would probably be more useful if you had it so that we can make comments, but that’s up to you.

@savannah_grace2009

Ah, I see. 😄 lol

@grcr

Marcurious is between 16 and 18. I haven’t really figured that out yet haha!

@savannah_grace2009

Interesting chapter!! I like it!

oh, and I really loved this:

“Give me one good reason why I shouldn’t kill you right now,” the Pythonos pressed the bloody knife to Marcurious’ throat.

Marcurious coughed. “Because I am just so amazing,” he flashed the Pythonos a smile.

One question… how old is Marcurious?

@scoutfinch180

It’s completely fine, no rush on how fast you give me feedback! (: I understand we all have lives outside of writing and KP xD

I can get started on giving you my opinion on the excerpt I saw introducing Marcurious tomorrow perhaps.

Actually, I would prefer if you gave your opinion on the first few chapters of my WIP and kind of go…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Yeah, that could definitely have some unique impacts. That being said, I feel like changing the mass kind of defeats the idea of the mass shifting. It definitely could be a related ability, but perhaps those would could use the two powers in tandem would be a more rare bunch.

I guess it would probably make the most sense to have…[Read more]

@a-r-kuhn

My problem with reading epic fantasy is when I start, I can’t stop, and my sleep schedule becomes thoroughly messed up. Last time I read an epic fantasy book, I read six hundred pages in a span of less than 24 hours and got about 4 hours of sleep…

Lol. I can’t stop either. I got all four books of the Stormlight Archive for my bir…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

(he coined the terms hard and soft btw).

Really? Huh. I didn’t know that. I feel like I’ve been aware of those terms for a super long time, but I didn’t read any of his books until last summer.

@rae

Jonas volunteered Riina first, obviously, but if that doesn’t work out, Saoirse might be able to get him to dance. She’s still skulking around.

@jonas

I know, sorry. I’ll try to write one today, but idk how tired I’m going to be :/

@rae

😬

You and I are the only ones who have RPed recently. Idk what to have happen. If this RP us to get back on its feet, we can’t be the only ones trying. Someone, help!

@highscribeofaetherium

You haven’t gone in a long time.

@thearcaneaxiom

That’s fair! I think the system has potential, though I do think it needs more of a mechanic to it. A version of telekinesis is cool, but what really sets it apart from normal telekinetic power? There’s the restriction to only cinders, and there’s some specific rules, but I think there could be more of a unique mechanic overa…

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@rae

It’s possible Riina could do it, but he did throw a knife at her head, so…

It’s possible that that could motivate her to humiliate him, but only if she had reason to think it would work. I’ll try to come up with something. We’ll see…

Guys…

@ANYONE
IS THERE ANY WAY ONE OF YOUR CHARRIES CAN GET OL’ JUNIOR TO ACTUALLY DANCE?!
 
Idk, I think being awkwardly pulled into a dance would humble him a little XD

*steeples fingers together and sets elbows on table*

@freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009 @idk, anyone’s welcome

I discovered Alpha’s greatest fear (I’m very proud of myself).

At first, Alpha, to me and to my charries, seems fearless. Sometimes he also seems heartless (like the time he almost murdered a doctor because the doctor obeyed orders…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Okay…someone invent a time machine so I can go back to when Riker was a boy and take him away before all that happened, then I’ll do it to Fin too, and Hans…

Then you’ll do it to Chase, and we’ll be good!

XD