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@jonas

It’s just a short story, and it is meant to be simple. Often the simplistic things are the hardest. What I love to write are the things that draw out a certain trait, make the reader to stop and think, or are often not done.

Even though Blake is only planned to be for this story, the struggle of “am I a hero or a villain” is Alpha’s.

@rae

Really interesting! Would this be the entire plot of the short story? The biggest problem I see is that the plot is quite simple, but it takes quite a long time to set it up. Have you considered using this in a full length book? I think it could make a very interesting character backstory. Otherwise, I’m sure you could make a good short s…[Read more]

I haven’t edited it at all.

@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @smiley @highscribeofaetherium @jonas @whoever

I just typed this out to get the jist of a short story idea. I’d like any thoughts or feedback, whether negative or positive. it’s called One Bullet

One Bullet
Once there was a great and mighty city, with people who believed in heroes, in the ones who made it their duty,…

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@loopylin @keilah-h

Oh wow, Chase’s powers are cool :0

Thank you *bows* one of the many things that drove me crazy trying to figure out XD

@loopy

Usually my problems become my charries’ problems, not the other way around lol

Yeah, that happens too. Idk, I cry with Alpha when he looses Emmie, reject Gloria with Glace when he was banished, I’m sho…[Read more]

oh, and any injuries sustained in one of his forms, does transfer into his other forms.

He also technically can do magic, but that is even more dangerous and chancey than him shifting.

@whalekeeper @rae@savannah_grace2009 @loopylin

Rina

“Or I could just unlock it like this,” Rina generated a blue crystal knife on her hand and slashed through the latch.

“Wait, why do you want to get in there?” she said suspiciously.

@keilah-h

Actually they are from completely different Galaxies. Shyiads are more universal than Nagas though, since they can shift into almost any organic life form. Chase has ancient shyiad blood, but it is polluted by his manly blood. It is almost a miracle he can shapeshift, that’s how long ago the shyiad blood was introduced into his line. He…[Read more]

Wow. Chase’s loyalties are really coming out.

Is it normal that as I was writing that rp, that my heartrate literally got faster and i almost felt genuine fear? Is it normal for writer’s in a character cloak to deeply feel the emotions of charries, or is it just me being more insane than usual?

@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @loopylin

Chase Duke

“It’s so dark,” Sef whispered. Chase drew her protectively against his body.

“It’s okay.” He hoped she couldn’t hear the panicked beat of his heart. He looked up at the sign, ignored the girl coming from nowhere, and spoke in a tone that sounded like a seasoned war veteran warning a…[Read more]

@thelittlejupitertion

Mistborn would probably be the best place to start with Sanderson (at least of the Cosmere books, which are the only ones I’ve read. The Cosmere is the shared universe in which many of his books take place.) You could also do Elantris, which is his first book, but that one isn’t as good in my opinion. Really you can sta…[Read more]

@thelittlejupitertion

Hey, I imagine characters singing songs, too! I’ve never bothered to count my ocs, so I have no idea lolol

Lol cool!! I was starting to believe that I was the only one who does that!

Oh, I see, lol. 😀

I mostly write in third person, but really it depends on the kind of book I’m writing. There are some books that are jus…

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@thearcaneaxiom

This is cool! I like the alphabet. So what makes Yojieo unique? How does it tie to its native speakers and their culture?

Hmm… oof, I haven’t yet thought about that. I’ll have to think for a little, and maybe I’ll have an answer later. 😅

@littlejupitertion

Welcome to KP! I’m Jonas, more enigmatically known as Cloaked Mystery. I write mostly in the fantasy genre, but usually with hard rules that verge on sci-fi. I like creating magic systems, usually hard ones, but I have a few soft-ish ones. My current project, which I am working on with my sister, @highscribeofaetherium, is a l…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @rae @savannah_grace2009 @loopylin

Rina

As she glared sulkily around the room, Rina noticed a group of people leaving the room and perked up.

Since nothing was happening, Rina portaled after them. She saw them investigating a creepy looking building.

That doesn’t seem very smart.

Rina stepped forward through a portal and popped o…[Read more]

@esther-c

Livia

“I’m sorry,” she looked sympathetically at Lukas. “I know how you feel…I mean, not seeing your sibling. I had an older sister too…but she died a couple years ago. She was killed when the Pythonos raided our town…our family’s never been the same.” she stared at the floor and felt a pang of grief, but managed to keep control…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Alright then, Rina will join them! Typing RP…

@esther-c

I’ve noticed that my story could probably take place somewhere else and not a lot would change.

Honestly…I’m not exactly sure why that’s a problem XD I mean…technically…any story can be taken out of it’s original setting and put somewhere else, with only a few little tweaks. I could easily move my story to Earth, get rid of A…[Read more]

@loopylin

Ah, okay.