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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 13 hours, 29 minutes ago
first off, I want a copy of your pfp!!!
Okay
Also, do you like coffee? Because I have a funny black cat one for coffee (pinterest is my friend)
Second, I find bad eating habits common among Authors. I think it’s because we get so lost in our book worlds that we forget about the real world.
Yeah…I can relate to t…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 13 hours, 34 minutes ago
@raxforge (because this short story has changed a little since you last read it) @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium
Fifth story!
(not sure if I like the title, but it’ll do)
A Scar Hidden by a Scarf
Cold. Freezing cold.Baron’s teeth chattered as he hugged himself, pulling his thin leather jacket closer around his body. His b…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 13 hours, 37 minutes ago
lol. No. I don’t do that until closer to 2:00 in the afternoon………………….
pretty much same for me usually, except the past few days. Mom and Dad have recently kept a stock of my favorite cereal so I now have incentive to eat breakfast, so recently I’ve skipped lunch.
And I just realized as I said that that I haven’t eaten anything…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 14 hours, 56 minutes ago
Okay, so here’s a magic system that I’ve been working on for a long time and keep modifying, but I feel is in a pretty good place now.
(Technically, it’s more like two magic systems, but they are highly connected to each other.)
First, to understand it, you need a quick crash course in my universe’s rules.
Humans are made up of five aspects:…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 16 hours, 26 minutes ago
You can share one of your systems if you want, Jonas! I think it’s safe to say you have a few. XD
You could say that…Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â (It’s about 13…)
I’ll see if I have a good one I haven’t talked about much.
I once beta-read a book which is now published, and it had a big magic problem which the author didn’t rew…
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G's profile was updated 18 hours, 25 minutes ago
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 day, 4 hours ago
(I’m only gone foe a few days, and suddenly people are changing their usernames and profile pictures all at once. How am I supposed to know who’s who anymore?)
You look at tags. Those never change.
I think I’m partly to blame for this. I changed my name to a silly nickname of mine, then Andrew changed his, and then other peo…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 day, 5 hours ago
Your senses were correct! This is a redemption story.
Small note on the next story, it was originally began for the short story prompt “a story of a scar” but never finished as such for it sparked the entire Baron Chronicles actually being written, and the story behind Baron’s scar has already been revealed so I had to…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 5 hours ago
Wow, name-changing is becoming a tread.
Tsk, tsk. No self-deprecation allowed on this topic.
Now you sound like Andrew lol
Does Chase have the element of Creatures? After all, he is the ultimate ✨Disney Princess✨!
I have that meme saved somewhere…
Yes, he’s actually the reason that element came to be. He’s also the reason I…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 8 hours ago
Okay everyone, I’m gonna share some of the races in my world!
Aquinos:
Aquinos have blue skin, hair, and eyes. They have the power to pull moisture out of the air and manipulate it. If there is no moisture in the air, they are helpless. They also tend to be easily dehydrated if they’ve used their power too much, but most of the time they c…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 8 hours ago
YOU CHANGED YOUR NAME TOOOO
YOU’RE NOT A POTATO ANYMORE
*brain explodes*
I LOVE IT
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 8 hours ago
AHHH YOU HOPPED ON THE TREND TOOOOO
I LOVE IT
You can still share those, since I would classify fantastical powers/abilities as magic on this topic. Basically we’re here to talk about any fantastical abilities, technically magic in-story or not. XD
Okay perfect!
I’m still fleshing those out a little as to why and how their powers w…[Read more]
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HighScribe posted an update 1 day, 8 hours ago
EVERYONE IS CHANGING THEIR NAMES I DON’T EVEN KNOW WHO ANYONE IS ANYMORE.
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 13 hours ago
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 13 hours ago
BTW how’s that drawing of Soldier going?
I wasn’t able to print the reference pictures until this morning. Currently, I’m thinking over posing.
My brother took the pictures and asked what it was. He had a good laugh over Soldier’s grin as he teleports bread lol. I’m gonna try to get him to read your fanfic, I think he’d like it a lot.
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 day, 13 hours ago
@ellette-giselle Here you go.
@keilah-h @highcribeofaethum
Fourth story!
Brutus
I am a hideous monster. I have taken so many lives, caused so much pain. And why? Why did I do it all? To please Father. To feel like I belonged and had purpose. That I was worth something. My true parents abandoned me, Father took me in. I had to prove to him…[Read more] -
Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 day, 14 hours ago
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 15 hours ago
I’ll be praying for you!
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G replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 16 hours ago
I may or may not get around to participating this time. I don’t know. Don’t count on a submission from me… 😅🙂
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